beccampho

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hi klennon14 my attempt of reviewing... I noticed that you have very minimum punctuation marks in your poem, so it does not have much of a flow. So I would ...

HI AliceAfternoon Thank you for your review, its quite helpful...

Thank you daysonend!

Hey its Becca I really like the poem, its well structured, I love the diction and how you've painted an interesting scene. I would love to read more of your ...

Hi there I am Becca I like the concept or theme of the poem, that God loves us all. But I must say that I think it is too repetitious, ...

Hi trelose I am becca, I love the lyrics a lot and I honestly think that they're great and well expressed. hope to read more of your writing!

Hey there I feel like your poem has a lot of potential and could have had a bit more depth. It seems a bit interesting but you could have added ...

Hi there The writting is really good and on point, the construction and grammar are proper and well used. Lols and about the 'gift' I also like that it has ...

Hi this poem is quiet easy to understand, and really if one has had an experience of crushing over someone they can very well relate to this poem. I like ...