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  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: High Dive

    O.K.... THAT was a poem i didn't quite understand.... I didn't really find it funny either. I don't know, just not the poem for me. I didn't understand that last ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I miss you

    Thanks for the review! I would have just sent them this letter, but they can't read English. They are not bilingual like me. I speak polish and English so I ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: The Gospel is Everything

    OK! Makes sense.

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: I did it for you

    Oh, ok. Well good job anyway!

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: I did it for you

    Wow. You must be going through some pain... Lovely poem. (I read it even though I'm not 16, but sshh!)

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Rainy Home (Edited)

    I don't know, but shouldn't this be a short story? Overall I love it. (Shouldn't there be a (.) at the end? SO if the cats were purring to her ...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Welcome to America

    Wow. Finally someone writes something about how it REALLY is these days. This is extremely annoying, all these problems we have. But its going to get worse. At first I ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Listen to My Heart

    sorry it submitted the same comment again! that was a glitch...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Listen to My Heart

    This was such an interesting story. Such heartbreak, such sadness. The way you made the character speak, I felt like I was really watching the video that the girl is ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Shaving

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    I actually LAUGHED OUT LOUD when I read , "and that, kids, is the story of how I turned into a carrot." I'm understanding that even when you strive to ...

    Sep 11, 2015
  • Art » General, General Re: Can I Have Your Number?

    Um... well that was surprising at the end!!!!! Awesome drawing skills! I'm just a little confused that you barely got into the story and then it ended. Maybe you should ...

    Sep 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: My cat is a loser

    At first I was like, ok.... that kinda sounds like my cat. It seems like you really hate your cat yet you still seem to have the love for it. ...

    Sep 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: I'm a Writer, Sir.

    Totally. Ok, so I guess I have to use that young imagination of mine.... ;-)

    Sep 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: I'm a Writer, Sir.

    That is such an inspiring story! I would love to see more of your work. I got a little confused though, what was the old man's dream?

    Aug 31, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alice

    Wow. Just wow. I love envisioning when I read. And wow did my imagination run wild. What caused you to write such a striking short story? You are an awesome ...

    Aug 31, 2015


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