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Re: Collection of Jelly Stuff! {Poems}
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Sep 17, 2015
Wha...???? OK I gotta say that wasn't THE funniest. I didn't really understand the first one, and it felt like the rhyme was forced. It didn't flow. "Only to say ... -
Re: Rainy Home (Edited)
I don't know, but shouldn't this be a short story? Overall I love it. (Shouldn't there be a (.) at the end? SO if the cats were purring to her ...
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Re: Welcome to America
Wow. Finally someone writes something about how it REALLY is these days. This is extremely annoying, all these problems we have. But its going to get worse. At first I ...
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Re: Listen to My Heart
This was such an interesting story. Such heartbreak, such sadness. The way you made the character speak, I felt like I was really watching the video that the girl is ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: Shaving
I actually LAUGHED OUT LOUD when I read , "and that, kids, is the story of how I turned into a carrot." I'm understanding that even when you strive to ...
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Re: Can I Have Your Number?
Um... well that was surprising at the end!!!!! Awesome drawing skills! I'm just a little confused that you barely got into the story and then it ended. Maybe you should ...
Sep 11, 2015 -
Re: My cat is a loser
At first I was like, ok.... that kinda sounds like my cat. It seems like you really hate your cat yet you still seem to have the love for it. ...
Sep 11, 2015 -
Re: Alice
Wow. Just wow. I love envisioning when I read. And wow did my imagination run wild. What caused you to write such a striking short story? You are an awesome ...
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: settling into the city
Such a pretty poem, that speaks such truth. The city really does have that kind of feel. I envision downtown chicago, when the morning dew practically freezes the place. I, ...
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Re: The Tree
Such a peaceful poem. I envisioned a little cottage in a forest. I envisioned looking up at the blue sky with leaves framing it. Its so pretty. But also: parents ...
Aug 31, 2015
