babygirl12

Well put. Honestly for a while i was confused about the focus of the poem. But closer to the end, I believe i got it. Nice job. :] Keep it ...

Wow!! Amazing!!! I believe I don't have anything else to say except this... Dang!!!! That's really good!!! :] Keep it up!! -BG-

Nice. :] Sad, but nice. Keep it up!! -BG-

This is sad, but very well written. I really like it. I don't believe you need criticism. Very nice. Keep it up!! :] -BG-

Very nice!! once again!! :] very interesting...still lacking in some punctuation...but over all nice. :] Keep it up!! -BG-

Its cute. :] There isn't much needed advice in this poem. It just is. And its nice, cute, and unique. :] Keep it up!! -BG-

Thanks guys, once again. :] Thanks for the encouragement!! I wasn't sure about this one either... But thank you. :] -BG-

Thanks guys! :] I was really unsure about this poem. Thanks, you both encouraged me. :] -BG-

Wow, thanks. As you can see, your the first person who commented this piece. I wrote this when I was 11 I believe. Sadly, I think I've lost my touch. ...

Nice. Very nice. Keep up the good work! :)

That's really cool. :] I really like this poem... keep up the good work...

:) thanks guys...for your reviews!! I didn't even plan to write this...i just started typing...lol I'm glad its understandable....

Nice, lol. Very interesting! :] Keep it up!!!

I didn't mean to make it sound like we have to earn His love before we go. I just want to have completed what he sent me to do before ...

It was God. :] The person I mentioned. I've known Him through out my life as Papa. You are correct!! :] lol And thanks, for the compliments. And I do ...