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Hi, this is my first story posted on the Young Writers Society Website, and I was just looking for some feedback on how to improve my writing technique and any ...

This was a short story that I wrote, and was looking for some feedback to improve my future writings. All feedback appreciated! 3… I listened to the pounding of my ...

This is what i entered in the twilight short short story competition. It had to be less than 350 words, and contain the words: Red Carpet Forks A Swan It ...

Hello... I recently was required to construct a short story from a childhood memory. It was for a school assignment, but this isn't what I handed in. Alas, it is ...

Alright, It's a bit long, I just want to know what you think... The tune takes a bit long to get settled in... Can you imagine Anything worse Than being ...

Hi, this was a competition entry to the writing about writing contest. I came up with this in lie... 5 minutes and I couldn't be bothered erasing it form existence, ...

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I need a book with an 'established critical reputation' to complete my reading log... know of any? I'm looking for one that has some adventure in it, something that I ...

Okay, well I started to write my book [hopefully] everyday in blog form. I'm not that far in, but this is the basic run down on what's happened:Cassie has run ...

Okay, my sister had to write a creative short story for english, and she asked me to write it for her. You had to describe someone you knew as best ...

Hi, this has been on my computer for a few months now, and I've finally decided to put it to the YWS panal! Just to clarify, this is the first ...

Hi, this is the senocd part of my fourth chapter in my first novel... with me so far? The rest; prologue part one, two and three, chapter one part one ...

Okay, so this first part is a dream, I want to know if you think i should take it out or not.Thanks for reading! I was standing in front of ...

It happened so fast that it even startled my Instinct. At once she was in control, running cross the room the door I had entered through. Behind us I heard ...

Okay, I started this thing a while ago, and i wanted your guys' opinion on if I should contiue! I don't want ANY nitpicks... i know, my grammar is terrible! ...

I'm not sure what to call this... It's based on a true story of me and my fried, but all names [Apart from Ed. Cullen] have been changes around. I'ts ...

Okay, this is the first story I've posted on YWS in the last few months, so I don't think it's very good. Be warned; it has some disturbing parts to ...

Hello, just something I wrote up this morning before I went to school. I would like one ripping to shreds, please!I was bred to kill. Yes; my sole purpose is ...

Part one of chapter one, 'How to save your life':I’m alive, I thought. In those minutes of solitude before the day began, I would often try to fall back asleep. ...

Okay, this is part two of chap. 1. This is set in the present, and the part 1 was set in the past... if you have any hints on how ...

Hey YWS-ers. Just to let all of you know that part 2 of chapter 1 is also up. even if you just post a thumbs up there to let me ...

Okay, I know that I only posted the original a few weeks ago, and I am only three chapters in, so I should not even be thinking about changing anything... ...

Back in the real world for this chapter part (as opposed to he memory world, which is at the beginning of each chapter.), after falling asleep from the best day ...

I got off easy. The cobra had pulled itself out of the fight. Surely next time I would not be so lucky. And I had absolutely no doubt that there ...

Hmmm... Not sure if this is Dramatic Poetry, but I tried to make it kind of dramatic. I didn't mean for this to be insensitive, and I am extremely sorry ...

Well, I wrote this like it would be said in a speaech, bit technically it's an essay. Enjoy:A few days ago, my friend pulled out a potato chip from a ...

I sprint through the hallways, new shoes squeaking on the linoleum. Stopping for a look at the map in my hand, I search for my science room, forty-eight. But the ...

Just a taster from something which I might continue: “You are special. You are unique. You have been chosen. Your country needs you. You wanted to be chosen; being chosen ...

The boy had never said a word in his life. He had never heard one, either. He didn’t even know what a word was. He communicated in hand signals. Tap ...

The crimson substance splashed on the pavement, exploding in all directions. Guilty stopped and looked down, eyes wide at what he had done. “No… Oh my god…” his voice was ...

They did it in a very cunning way. First, they tapped into the supermarket security systems, which held all of the credentials of every customer who had ever used a ...

The time Chasers :: Part OneBy the time she had slithered out of her clothes, walked freely over to her draws and carefully extracted her poly prop and old pair ...

The kitchen was directly next to the hallway, which held the stairs and, most importantly, the front door. When the sound wave hit, she could most certainly hear the slow ...

16+ for use of mild swear words.“You love it here. Everything is perfect. The food is delicious. You don’t miss your friends or family. You don’t want to go home. ...

I felt like a little child being taken to the naughty corner as I followed the woman out of the room. There was no kitchen in the hotel unit, just ...

“I imagine you’re hungry,” came the calming voice. I opened my eyes to find one of the nurses standing one step inside the door, same place as earlier in the ...

Written for 12 year old boys, so excuse the lack of description. Perhaps pointers on how to make it more exciting? I appreciate you reading!Mr and Mrs Keels walked onto ...

I have read the scene a few times andi believe this to be a real, true to heart representation of what Edward and Bella were supposed to do during the ...

As I leaned against the crate of ripe kiwifruit, time passed by me. Mum was somewhere in the vegetable section, and dad was skimming over the potatoes (“$4.99 a KG!”). ...

“Hey, JESS!” I yell over the bubbling broth of the classroom babble. Even from a mere two meters away, I know I have to yell to command her attention - ...

Early Summer, 2007:It was clearance day, and the year eleven, twelve and thirteen students were free at last. A year nine girl watched them sullenly through the classroom windows. “They’re ...