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Re: 5 Reasons Transvestites Are Better Than Everyone
Hey,kiicoh, who did that help? What did that accomplish? Yeah, write a bad review about something you did not even bother to read, why dont you! That is not unfair. ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Is the English Language sexist? (Essay)
This is very good. I am going to assume, as one never should, that Ben stands for Benjamin or another male name, not Benny or a female name, and say ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games
This is probably a little late, since all of these posts seem to be from a few years ago, from before catching fire came out, but the ending of CF ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: First Sight
it was indeed short, but, really, what else is there to say? your friend kept it to the point and got the job done. it is hard to write a ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: The Happy
i am sorry. maybe i am just a synic or grumpy, but i didn't really care for this very much. i dont want to make it seem as if i ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: On Top of A City
sometimes a lack of punctuation is done on purpose because people believe it adds to the work. have you ever read pygmalion? he does that so many times it isnt ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: A B C...
first of all, it was really a neat idea to do the abc theme, it brought something new to poetry, although i wouldn't really know if it was new or ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Lost Childhood
this is a moving story. i thought at first, "well this is not really poetry," but i continued reading and found it profound and devastating. i just am wondering if ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet a Twist in the Story
let me just get one thing off my chest. love the ending. i really like how juliet ended up unhappy and rueful. that is so refreshing from a story. i ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: poetry
first of all, i would like to mention that i really appreciate the use of verbs in this poem. when i read this at first, i thought that maybe you ...
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: virgin kiss.
i like it. sorry, that was dumb; let me start again. i like the way this piece rolls. i am not sure if you intended it to be quick, or ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Soul to Sound
this is a moving poem. i noticed that it is in present tense. you stuck with that the entire time, which is actually quite impressive and difficult. now, some people ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Cumulonimbus
i really liked reading this. it has a wonderful flow and a superb word choice. it also has great emotion and it sounds as if a lot of work was ...
Oct 21, 2009 -
Re: No title
this is a very good poem. it has emotion, good word choice, and i actually understand it, not like some idiotic poems. i am not usually much of a poetry ...
Oct 20, 2009
