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ok it was great but a bit catchy :D :D :D :D :D but i think it would be better if it had more explaining and more comas and it ...

cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D i loved the rhythm it was so rhyming and the idea is great but no comas My story is hard to understand. If you ...

well it was good but quite short no grammar mistakes it was great and it's interesting but there was no explanation about the characters much :D :D but i liked ...

OK I liked it. And I loved the idea. But next time reduce the spaces. But if you think it's not needed go ahead don't. But what I think is ...

Aha.... aha... aha... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: How bad i am the 3rd to review.Though the poem was so nice. But a bit catchy and dull. And stop putting THE ...

i liked the rhythm but there were a few mistakes. You are here,I am there. legend tells us: "losing is something we can afford to gain." i hope you will ...

sorry but i have to admit it i didn't get it the whole poem was a bit hard to realize and stuff like that and there were mistakes OK here ...

OK i will give em..... 98%. It was great really but the reason i gave 98 is because the poem was a bit catchy and some places it didn't make ...

OK it was great i loves it but it was a bit catchy but great next time try to make it more realistic OK. there were 1 or 2 mistakes ...

i liked the whole poem it was great the way i saw it there were no mistakes at all. i liked the rhythm the most.But make it a little bit ...

I liked was nice i loved the rhythm.But i saw 1 or 2 mistakes. But it didn't harm the poem and next time make the poem a bit more realistic. ...

great i liked was fantastic great!.But it was a bit catchy And i think adding capitals would be nice but if you think it's not necessary go ahead you don't ...

exactly silverSUNLIGHTx you are right i didn't get it too try to make it a little more realistic and then i think it would be perfect but there are some ...

it's great :D good rhyming and a little bit catchy But great poem i hope you will continue to wright poems good luck :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: ...

wow it was cool 8) 8) 8) 8) i loved it but there were 1 or 2 mistakes but it was great I know it's true. I say it too ...