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relatively short journey How far away is she from the war zone? The phrase above indicates it’s somewhere near. If that’s so, won’t the war also affect the area she’s ...

I haven’t read the previous part and, thus, my review will be only focused on this one. If you have already covered the points I mention, please ignore it. Thank ...

From the start to the middle, there were hardly any descriptions. You maintained the focus on their conversation. It was simple, and not influenced or emphasised with any actions from ...

It came as a surprise that suspect 009 was actually a woman. I wasn’t expecting that at all. @ConfusedGlasses covered almost everything I wanted to say. I’d suggest you to ...

That was an intense cliff-hanger! I stumbled across this chapter and saw it had no reviews. I thought of giving it a try because it definitely caught my interest. It’s ...

I’m curious as to why you categorised this piece as short story when it’s clearly a poem. Is there a particular reason for that? There was once the man who ...

My name is Ethan Marcus Phero (E.M.P. I know) but it could be worse. I just turned 17 last month, May, and that was when things started to get bad. ...

I haven’t read previous chapters and, thus, my review will be solely based on this one. Now, my eyes peered into the oaks and pines and maples that made up ...

In the ending, were you implying Mrs. C. V. Hemmings was a thief herself? This story was packed with action, humour, mystery, and a pinch of drama – it maintained ...

I’ll be honest. I didn’t read all of it. In order to improve this, you need to focus on the structural and technical aspects. The entire short story’s consisted of ...

This poem shows the speaker’s simple way of articulating her thoughts, reflecting the concept of innocent love. I find it cute and sweet to read that she’s “fighting” to gain ...

The biggest issue I spotted was that you didn’t take the time to develop the scenes, and make it as intense and tension-filled as you could have done. Here are ...

This poem, although written in such a simplistic style, had a powerful effect on me. It’s the story of a soldier who passed away fighting for his country and a ...

Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. Now I'll move on to the review. I applaud you for your originality! I’ve never read a story like this one ...

Interesting concept. I’ll mention the improvements before I move on to the positive points. There are lights on the horizion of a midnight black sky. Instead of telling us there ...