arianaSarroyo

Hi there and welcome to YWS. Ariana here with your review. Well to start off, this was definitely an interesting change from most of what I read. This is like ...

Hi there. I'm here to give a quick review so here it goes. In my opinion, there wasn't much wrong with this, other than the layout. I know it isn't ...

Hi there. I'll start off this review by saying that this felt more like a quote belonging to a speech or essay than poem. I don't mean that I'm a ...

Hey there. Ariana here with your review. So to start off, I liked how you stayed true to the narrative nature of the piece, fairly well actually. In addition, I ...

Hi there! I have to say, I really liked this! I liked how you dedicated it to John and Yoko. (At first I had to think of who Yoko was) ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! :) So anyway, I'm going to start this poem off by noting what I liked. This poem starts off being repetitive, but then reverts into ...

Hi there! I definitely did not expect to see anything about Arabic. But this was a pleasant surprise. I always like to learn words in other languages so I like ...

Hi there...I had to re-read the beginning to get the gist of it. I was expecting something different. BUT this exceeded my expectations. This was eloquently written, very descriptive and ...

Hi there! Ariana here to review. To start off, this is a good piece. It has some nice metaphors and you conveyed your emotions strongly here. The only problem was ...

This was. . . Interesting. Not in a not good way, but I felt like this was a product of a slightly inquisitive-and imaginative mindset. I do have one comment ...

I liked this but this was REALLY short! This was a lovely meaningful piece, but I would have loved to have read more. You seemed to have just ended it ...

This is sweet. It's short, simple and leaves the reader feeling satisfied. I liked how you evoked strong imagery here. There were a few things I found unnecessary, though. There ...

Wow. I felt like I could relate to this on a profound level. Sometimes when I'm feeling really depressed, this is how I feel. So I have to commend you ...

Hi there! Ariana with your review today. Well I liked how you started this off with strong imagery. This is a key to bettering poetry as it is always nice ...

Hi there Merish. Well I have to tell you that opening this poem up, I expected something else. Something witty or amusing. Initially I thought of Corn Pops (I hope ...