arianaSarroyo

Hello... I'm wonder why this has no comments? :O Anyway, on to the poem. You have a nice idea here. The figurative language is good, the imagery is okay. However, ...

Hello there Megz. :-) I liked this poem, even though it was depressing. :-( The way you wrote it was creative and it served as a lovely tribute. Now, on ...

Hi wordsandwishes! I really liked this poem. The imagery was superb and really added to the overall "feeling" of the poem. I also loved the expressions you used-not to crazy, ...

Hello there! I came across this literary work expecting o see something other than what I did. The good news is, I was most certainly, pleasantly surprised! It appears I ...

Hello there! I will be doing your review for today. First off, this is both beautiful and chilling. The way you portray war is so chilling, gruesome, yet so real. ...

Hello there. I think that this is a nice work you have here. What I liked is the idea behind it, the emotions, all superb. At some points, you could ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! :-) first of all, this is a very lovely piece of literature. I like how it's brief, so it's not hard to remember. You seem ...

Hello there! First off, like magpie has said, your figurative language and imagery is superb. In fact, it is far superior to some that I have seen. I truly am ...

Hello, it appears as though I'll be your reviewer for today. First enough, I likr the whole concept behind this. It is wholesome and honest, and I commend you for ...

Hello there. First off, I'd just like to take the time to commend yu on this powerful poem. The choice of words sure did convey a message, a strong and ...

Hello... I'd like to take the time to say, excellent job here! I really liked this work about an ace of cards. The idea was creative and most of the ...

Hello there... How do I start? I'm not a pro. At reviewing, but I'll give it a shot. :-) To start, this piece relay did draw me in. From the ...

Hello! Ari with you review today. For starters, I certainly do have to commend you. The language that you used here really added to the feeling of a marionette doll. ...

Hello there. I'm not excellent at giving reviews, but here's a shot anyway. To begin, I think you have a nice premise here. It was interesting to read. However, it ...

appears that you have a nice piece of writing her. I only have a few suggestions. To start, I think that you can write something other than “when can I ...