WARNING: This is my 150th review and i dont really have much to say about this poem,so this is probably gonna be c*ap...
hey there!
i seriously enjoyed reading this!( though i dont understand why all your poems end sadly *sighs* but anyway its your work, so your choice...)
(okay back to reviewing)
the flow of the poem was just... magical, it just rolled of my tongue like silk...( because of which i canot help but read it again and again)
WONDERLUST- awesome choice of word for the tittle...it seriously is interesting!
"You were all I ever wanted
we were all we ever needed"
this indeed is a great line... it should be quoted ( but the problem is i don't know how to do it, so...)
overall i loved your poem... you should definetly write more of there but with *cough* happy endings *cough*
none other than
FD46~
Points: 93
Reviews: 216
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