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ariah347

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: A Romantic Revenge -A perfect life and a perfect love

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    This was a delightful rollercoaster of emotions, and teenage experiences kept me engaged from start to finish. The story unfolds at Gurukul High, where cheers echo through the stadium, setting ...

    Aug 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Intrusive Thoughts

    This is powerful and profound. It outlines those intrusive thoughts that absorb the mind when you experience anxiety. As someone who suffers from it and has battled all day, every ...

    Aug 7, 2023
  • Short Story » Health, Narrative Re: Why Try Walking … When You Can Dance

    This heartwarming and inspiring story took me on a journey of resilience, self-discovery, and finding strength in the face of adversity. It effectively portrays the theme of friendship and self-accept

    Aug 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Hand

    Nice discovery! Always fun to come across old writing. I have been terrible at preserving mine!! This poem presents a short but intriguing glimpse into your life, hinting at a ...

    Aug 4, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: She Lives Inside Me

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    The passage vividly captures the innocence and imagination of a little girl as she enjoys playing in the mud and making her imaginary chocolate pie. The use of descriptive language ...

    Aug 2, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 9

    This excerpt presents an emotionally charged scene with complex relationships and internal struggles. The focus is on the crash survivor, Zybryn, and his interaction with Jed and his sister, Lakisha. ...

    Aug 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: It's not me, It's You.

    As I read this poem, I can feel the weight of emotions and the internal struggle the poet is going through. The opening lines express a sense of optimism and ...

    Aug 2, 2023
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Realistic Re: All Knowing God

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    As I read this poem, I am transported to a place of introspection and raw emotion. The verses beautifully capture the struggle between cherished memories and haunting regrets, making me ...

    Aug 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Why I cannot Write

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    This is a poignant and introspective poem that delves into the struggles and doubts faced by a writer in their creative journey, which I can relate to as of late. ...

    Aug 1, 2023
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dear Stupid Blank Page

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    Ah, the old writer's block debacle! This perfectly elicits how writers feel when confronted with a blank page and no idea how to fill it. It is humorous and relatable, ...

    Jul 31, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: you read too many books while i read the pages of your skin

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    I think a good name for this would be "Pages of You." Overall, this is beautifully crafted and emotionally charged, delving into the intricate emotions of admiration, longing, and unrequited ...

    Jul 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Body is Not Poetry

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    This poignant and introspective poem delves into the complexities of self-perception and vulnerability. You skillfully portray the body as a canvas, marked by the weight of insecurities and life exper

    Jul 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: She was the Sun, He was the Moon

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    This short and impactful poem beautifully uses celestial metaphors to depict two individuals' contrasting personalities and emotions and their journey toward finding love and companionship. The way it

    Jul 30, 2023
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Sun and the Moon

    This story beautifully captures the warmth and camaraderie of celebrating Christmas with friends. The descriptive language effectively paints a vivid picture of the feast and the joyful atmosphere, ma

    Jul 29, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Fractures in Forever: Chapter 1: Briefing

    Hellooo! Wishing you well :) Normally, I am not interested in this sort of story, but your narrative in this piece is engaging, weaving a story of intrigue and ambition ...

    Jul 29, 2023


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia