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Re: A Romantic Revenge -A perfect life and a perfect love
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Aug 9, 2023
This was a delightful rollercoaster of emotions, and teenage experiences kept me engaged from start to finish. The story unfolds at Gurukul High, where cheers echo through the stadium, setting ... -
Re: Intrusive Thoughts
This is powerful and profound. It outlines those intrusive thoughts that absorb the mind when you experience anxiety. As someone who suffers from it and has battled all day, every ...
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Re: Why Try Walking … When You Can Dance
This heartwarming and inspiring story took me on a journey of resilience, self-discovery, and finding strength in the face of adversity. It effectively portrays the theme of friendship and self-accept
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Re: Hand
Nice discovery! Always fun to come across old writing. I have been terrible at preserving mine!! This poem presents a short but intriguing glimpse into your life, hinting at a ...
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Re: She Lives Inside Me
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Aug 2, 2023
The passage vividly captures the innocence and imagination of a little girl as she enjoys playing in the mud and making her imaginary chocolate pie. The use of descriptive language ... -
Re: I Knew Chapter 9
This excerpt presents an emotionally charged scene with complex relationships and internal struggles. The focus is on the crash survivor, Zybryn, and his interaction with Jed and his sister, Lakisha. ...
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Re: It's not me, It's You.
As I read this poem, I can feel the weight of emotions and the internal struggle the poet is going through. The opening lines express a sense of optimism and ...
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Re: All Knowing God
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Aug 2, 2023
As I read this poem, I am transported to a place of introspection and raw emotion. The verses beautifully capture the struggle between cherished memories and haunting regrets, making me ... -
Re: Why I cannot Write
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Aug 1, 2023
This is a poignant and introspective poem that delves into the struggles and doubts faced by a writer in their creative journey, which I can relate to as of late. ... -
Re: Dear Stupid Blank Page
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Jul 31, 2023
Ah, the old writer's block debacle! This perfectly elicits how writers feel when confronted with a blank page and no idea how to fill it. It is humorous and relatable, ... -
Re: you read too many books while i read the pages of your skin
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Jul 30, 2023
I think a good name for this would be "Pages of You." Overall, this is beautifully crafted and emotionally charged, delving into the intricate emotions of admiration, longing, and unrequited ... -
Re: My Body is Not Poetry
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Jul 30, 2023
This poignant and introspective poem delves into the complexities of self-perception and vulnerability. You skillfully portray the body as a canvas, marked by the weight of insecurities and life exper -
Re: She was the Sun, He was the Moon
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Jul 30, 2023
This short and impactful poem beautifully uses celestial metaphors to depict two individuals' contrasting personalities and emotions and their journey toward finding love and companionship. The way it -
Re: The Sun and the Moon
This story beautifully captures the warmth and camaraderie of celebrating Christmas with friends. The descriptive language effectively paints a vivid picture of the feast and the joyful atmosphere, ma
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Re: Fractures in Forever: Chapter 1: Briefing
Hellooo! Wishing you well :) Normally, I am not interested in this sort of story, but your narrative in this piece is engaging, weaving a story of intrigue and ambition ...
Jul 29, 2023
