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Well it is a very good prolouge, I will tell you that. Sorry it has taken so long to review, but I am here now. I skimmed over some of ...

Hi, so sorry it took my so long to get to your piece, but I am here to help now. So this is a really good start to something that ...

Okay so I am timid to review this because of how well it has already been looked at, but I will give it my best shot. Sorry if I repeat ...

Okay so my review will most likely pale in comparison to Searria H.'s but I want to give my imput as well. I am not going to go over what ...

Hi, so sorry it took me so long to review, but here it is. I like this poem for a number of reasons. the imagery is astounding, and each stanza ...

I like your poem. Its very complex, but yet simple. Great refrain, and amazing oxymorons. I don't know if I love that its so comparative, because you can't really get ...

This surely is an intresting piece. The idea is very much there, but it needs some work. It's a shame that your structure is off, considering the idea and how ...

Hi there. This is an intresting piece that explores alot in just a few lines. I really liked it. There are a few suggestions I would like to make, and ...

Intresting piece. There is alot in such a short poem. I want to give a few suggestions on how to make it even better. You have a very specific stucture ...

I like this piece. It is a really nice description of a beautiful girl. I like how when your using similies to describe her you keep with a theme in ...

Hi, so you asked me to review this piece so here goes. I liked the story, its full of emotion and for the most part very well written. I liked ...

Well i like this piece for many reasons. Most of them of private and jelouse preportions, but I am here to review, so I shall put that aside for now. ...

Hi! I liked the piece alot. I loved how you portrayed your idea of this connection between two people. The flow for me is too fast, and alot of it ...

Really well written with just the right ammount of imagery. It's structure is intresting, and while I may not favor it, it is admirable that you kept to it, rather ...

Very pretty and well written. The flow is a bit choppy in "And then I see one/ That breaks free and shoots to/ I know not where". It was just ...