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Re: Here It Is Again
Hey there auother2b here and ready to review. (mostly because I detest french homework) What I liked: 1. The flow. It wasn't bad, but not amazing. It was...nice. A nice ...
Oct 24, 2013 -
Re: The Heart is the Culprit
Hey there. So happy to be the first to sink my teeth into this piece. What I liked: 1. The idea. Though I don't really get the image of an ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Swimming Through Pavement
Hey there. So I am sooo excited to review this piece!! What I liked: 1. The idea/message. I myself know what it is like to struggle and try to trudge ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: Writing my plight (2 edition)
Hey there Aouther2b here! I love this piece and can't wait to review it! What I liked: 1. The message. I myself struggle with the issues you express, and unfortunately ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: Naiv Wishes in a Sullen Void of Hopelessness
Hi there. Aouther2b here to review (although I'm sure you already knew that! lol) What I liked: 1. The flow. not too fast, not too slow, as goldielocks would say ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: i fumble with the keys a lot
Hey there! aouther2b here to review your great piece. What I liked: 1. The message. This may just be the cynic in me talking but I think that this idea ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: My Friend
Aouther2b here to review! What I liked: 1. The mystery. As a way of showing rather than telling what you want to say this poem reaches top bar, far none. ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: Little Lines For Santa
Well this is sure intresting. Kinda creepy and insane, but in a brilliant way. So onto the review. What I liked: 1. The imagery. While gruesome and graphic your images ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: The Taste of Mirrors
Okay, name and description drew me in. The actual poem, that was what kept me reading. Love it!! (imagine me singing that, prob off key) So reviewing time (I'm singing ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Blank
Hey there. A blank page is to a writer as a blank canvas is to a painter. And this blank page has been filled with a very beautiful piece. What ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Clockwork
Hey there. This a really intracate piece. Can't wait to get this review started. What I liked: 1. The language. The variation of words you used was a pleasent sight. ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Silver Night
Hey there. Great work here, can't wait to review!! What I liked: 1. The imagery. You did a great job of creating seansual imagery throughout the poem. Great job! 2. ...
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: On the Other Side
Hey there. So this is an intresting piece. I am so ecited to review it for you. What I liked: 1. The flow. You have a nice, smooth, and very ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: If My Breath Stops
Wow a very powerful piece. Loved it (no pun intended). Cant wait to review. What I liked: 1. The flow. It was fast, but a good kind of fast. Like ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: Calypso
I like this piece a lot and I'm so excited to review it. What I liked: 1. The story. You kept true to the greek myth, but put a beautiful ...
Aug 23, 2013
