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Hey, Ancient :) I'm kind of tired so I'm just going to jump right into the review. I don't like doing grammar or punctuation because I'm bad at it myself ...

This is my kind of poem. The first couple of lines in your poem made my heart ache with previous pains. Your short description sure is correct. The entire poem ...

I'm really fond of this short story. It hits home as I too have lost a friend before. Luckily, we've found our way back to each other but some friends ...

Hey, Nina! I think that Kiss of Death is a good title for your short story, just so you know. The over all concept of this is incredibly dark. It's ...

Hey, Beans. I normally don't like reviewing things that have multiple parts to it that I haven't read but I want to make an exception to this because I couldn't ...

Hey, Taco. I like breaking lines up in poetry sometimes when I review it and then generally summarizing the rest of it. Over all, I think you did great with ...

Hey, MightyPencil. I will say that I started off reading this being very confused. The title intrigued me and as I read the first couple of sentences, I feel like ...

Hello, Epic. I don't normally read Essays but it is review day and I'm getting out of my comfort zone. I think it's good to have feedback from someone who ...

Hey, Wannabe. First off, thanks so much for sharing your story The Whole Enchilada. I probably shouldn't have read this when I was hungry, but that's my own fault. The ...

Hey, GreenLight! I just need you to know that this is beautiful and there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. Every descriptive line you wrote made me feel as though ...

Hey, Jumpy. You reviewed me so I'm going to return the favor. This entire piece of work is hilarious. It greatly captures the rush of needing to get to your ...

Hey, Metal! Great job, as usual. I like to split up poetry/short story in this case (But it looks like a poem to me) by "verses" when I review so ...

Hello, Brielle! I just wanted to let you know that I normally don't do grammar but I will say that there were a lot of spelling issues in your short ...

Hello, Jakob! I'll start off by saying that I really enjoyed this poem. Like in many other reviews I've done, I really enjoy trying to guess what the poem is ...

Hello, GrinningMan. Welcome to YWS. I just joined recently as well and I'm taking part in this Review Day and this is the first one I'm doing so let's get ...