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I really like this. It does follow the plot of movies I've seen in the past but people don't normally expect a twist like that. I really enjoy how you ...

Hey, Fight4. I don't really like reading chapters that are so far out in the story because that means I'll be a bit lost but I'll try my best to ...

Hey, Beans. I'm totally going to stick with this series and keep on trucking through the reviews for review day and simply because I enjoy this series and I do ...

Your short description was a trap, as I was very confused by it and slightly I am very tired. Anyways, I think that this was a pretty interesting twist on ...

Hey, there. I want to say that this poem is really beautiful. I won't say it took a turn because I feel as though I saw it coming. My father ...

I especially enjoy short poems such as this one. Getting the point across without saying too much. I love the beach, so this sits well with me and makes me ...

I got slightly distracted because the name Lapis reminded me of Lapis Lazuil from minecraft but any who, on to reviewing! You already know I love this series because I've ...

Hey, Beans. Let's just start off by saying that I really dislike reviewing things that are chapter 2 if I haven't read chapter 1 so forgive me because I'm going ...

Hey, Jaspercat. I always did enjoy creative writing class and I'm glad to see that people still take those type of classes, especially seeing that most people nowadays don't enjoy ...

Hey, 90skids. I'm a little bit tired but I'm working on Review Day and I came across your story and I wanted to try to find chapter 1 before I ...

I am such a huge fan of short works. I like things that just get right to the point and make every word count, even though it's not that many ...

I read this out loud in the voice and the way I thought it should be read, which just made the poem even more amazing. The spaces and lines that ...

You handed this to me for me to review and I don't regret it at all. I think the story was really sweet and it reminded me of a children's ...

I really enjoy this. It's simple and short, right to the point. It's not over complicated with descriptive words that cloud the readers mind. You can tell exactly what is ...

Hey, Isha. Firstly, thanks so much for sharing your poem with us. I'm new here and I love reading poetry, especially good poetry. I'll start off by saying that I ...