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Re: deleted
Hello, Eveningstar. I'm Nonny and I'll be reviewing your poem today. I generally split the poem up into verses and I review them seperately and then all together. So, let's ...
Oct 27, 2014 -
Re: His Beautiful Lies
Hey, Gravity. I love me a good romantic poem about heartbreak as I tend to write some of them myself. So, let's see what you have here. 1st verse : ...
Oct 27, 2014 -
Re: I Looked in His Eyes
Hey, OnGoesLife. I'm Nonny and I'll be reviewing your piece tonight. I'm going to comment on each verse separately so it's easier to review the piece as a whole. I'll ...
Oct 27, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 26 Part 1
Hey, happy review day! This review is brought to you by Wicked Squids. But seeing as the apartments were small and they barely had any furniture or possessions, it seemed ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Mistake
Hey, happy review day from team wicked squids. I'm on my phone trying to help my team out so forgive any mistakes caused by auto correct. I thought this story ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 19
Hey, etherealamber. Happy Review Day from the Wicked Squids! I hope you're having a good one and making our team lots of points! Let's get this piece of work out ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Gates of Hell
Hey, ka67. Happy Review Day from the Wicked Squids! May the best team win! I figured I'd knock your work out of the green room for ya. In the second ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Burnt Silver
Happy Review Day! It looks like you're on my team so let's go Wicked Squids! Looks like this piece has been in here for awhile and I will say that ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: CO
Hey, Lioness. Happy Review Day from the Wicked Squids! This is Nonny here and I'll start off by saying that I really enjoy short poems. Impact that can be presented ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Why?
Hey, Amber! Welcome to YWS. It looks like I'm your first review ever so I won't take this job lightly. I think that the poem is very interesting. I think ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: Definition of Ignorance
I'm a fan of short poems and I think you really hit the nail with this one. It's a 5 x 7 x 5 which is something I haven't seen ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: La Biesta en Arriaga (or) Maternal Instincts (I can't decide yet :) )
Hey, Catherine. I'll start off by saying that you first mention "They" said we were leaving tonight and then "They" were from school but other then that, I can't really ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 88-89 (Revised)
Hey, BlueAfrica. I’m Nonny and I thought that on this review day I would attempt to get works out of the green room that have no reviews and that have ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: To Sienna
Hey, Summerlovee. I see you are on my team! We are the ninjas! I'm gonna go ahead and review this piece and get it out of the green room and ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Silver Wolves
Hey, KatGirl. I'm Nonny. I'll start off by saying that when I first clicked on this I did not expect that big title to be a giant picture of what ...
Sep 28, 2014
