anna91423

This is stunning. I love it. The imagry is absolutly amazing, your vocabulary is beautiful, and the whole structure adds to the intrigue of it. I keep re-reading it, I ...

This was very cute! Perhaps a little cliche and over simple for my usual taste and it didn't have much original imagry, but even so it was very sweet and ...

Hi Henry, I'm Annabel, I'm 16 years old and go to a regular old boring secondary school in Oxfordshire (England), although I just started the sixth form which is a ...

This was really interesting. I had a really clear image in my head of what was going on, and it's interesting to consider the possibilities of what it could be ...

Hi, this was a really interesting poem. It left me feeling a bit confused, and I've re-read it a couple times and am still a bit confused (then again my ...

Oh my gosh, this is so sweet! It made me smile, and I'm in a rubbish mood, so that in itself is a miracle :P I love the imagry of ...

This was really beautiful. I could so relate to the speaker, it felt exactly like I was being spoken directly too. I read it a few times over and it ...

Hi there :) I really enjoyed this, but there were a number of places where I stumbled: (Verse one) I still remember when we first met The sound of the ...

Hi :) This is such an interesting concept, and you've really done it justice. My only suggestion would be to add a little more punctuation, for instance I would've written ...

Hello :) Firstly, I really enjoyed this piece. The title really made me want to read the poem because it was simple but dramatic with a lot of implications. The ...

Hahaha, this made me laugh so much. You're a very funny writer and I really hope this story is true. Let me know when you next write something, I'd love ...

So this was really interesting. The personification of misery was subtle but perfectly executed, your imagry was beautiful (if a bit cliche'), and the overall the poem was eerie and ...

This is so good, I'd love to read the next chapter when it's posted. It was interesting from the start and the imagry is fantastic. The only thing I'dsay is ...

Hey, so sorry I have only just got around to reviewing this! I did read and like this, but have been so busy revising for my GCSE exams that I ...

I'm actually crying right now. This is just perfect. It's beautiful and touching and just so perfect. I've read some of your writing before and you're such a talented writer. ...