anna91423

Hey, I thought this was really clever and paints such a vivid picture in so few words. I agree with the other reviewer that the line "the way they should" ...

Hey, I thought this was awesome! The message was just so great and if you're writing from your own real life perspective then you should be so proud to have ...

I love this! The rhyme feels bitter sweet and you personify sadness but then challenge the expectations of viewing it as an antagonist.The lines "Do you think it enjoyed watching, ...

This was interesting- nice idea to use a horses perspective onbeing left by, I'm guessing, the owners daughter. Some of the imagery felt a little forced and over the top, ...

Hey, your poem is really funny and so clever. It has that kind of bitter sweet feel where I'm laughing but feeling uneasy about the underlying comment on the fast ...

Hello, this was pretty good! I'm going to start with the good stuff before I make a couple suggestions. I think it's such a sweet poem and the repetition is ...

This is perfect. Can I please steal your vocabulary?! Your choice of words is impeccable and the imagery is faultless. I wish I'd written this- it's one of the best ...

I enjoyed this poem- it's very thought provoking. You do a good job of incorporating quotes and using enjambement. Some of the phrases were slightly cliche- "empty eyes" and "sun ...

I found this really interesting. I liked that Eve was the victim and the snake the antagonist rather than Eve being blamed for a sin the snake convinced her to ...

Hello :) I thought this was absolutely beautiful- such a nice idea that felt both personal to two individuals but also applicable to everyones nostalgia. Audy suggested that you get ...

Hello, I really like your poem. You already have a lot of constructive criticism for this so I don't want to go into that too much- you know where grammar ...

I really like this. It's beautiful in its child-like simplicity and the whole tone is just so wistful. The end was absolutely perfect, it somehow struck a balance between meloncoy ...

I loved this! The rhyme gives the narrative voice a child like feel which made me think it was going to be quite a funny, cutesy poem. When this child ...

Hi again! I'm going to try and give a really thorough review here because I enjoyed the story and the narrative voice so much and think that if you re-drafted ...

I loved this! The ending actually made me laugh out loud. It's such an interesting piece and very clever. It wasn't the type of work I predicted it was going ...