angelhunter97

This is really good, but there are some things I wanted to point out. The flow of the story is really choppy. The scenes don't seem together as they probably ...

This is a very short poem that was written by a skilled hand. In short, it sums up how things really are when it comes to battle. You fight, you ...

This is such a beautiful love poem. It's so sweet and romantic, and I'm sure those of us writers on here would appreciate reading this. They would call that true ...

This truly brought tears to my eyes. It's so emotional and deep. It's saddening how in some cases, this is true, and it breaks my heart. And all of the ...

I'm terribly sorry for your loss. She must have meant a great deal to you. This poem is so deep and fits with its theme perfectly, though the inspiration is ...

Hunting. A beautiful topic I haven't seen many write about. But this is picture perfect as to how I would see someone hunt. Very personal and filled with a lot ...

This is an amazing poem. I love how you incorporated your title into the poem itself, very clever. :) This is very deep and brilliant. I'm sure many can relate ...

Excellent. This is just how the generations are nowadays. It's explains how everything is, and it's perfect.I highly recommend getting this out in a newspaper, if possible. Perhaps it will ...

This is fantastic. The imagery is amazing, and the words just make me shiver. One of the best poems I have ever read, even if it is short. Keep it ...

This isn't a terribly sexual poem. It's a very emotional piece that perhaps many can relate to. Don't be worried about "implied things." This is a wonderful piece that isn't ...

This is a great piece. However, there are a couple mishaps. For one, your sentences are too long and should be cut up. Secondly, the beginning is nice, but it ...

This is very interesting. It's cut short and to the point, which is brilliant. I'm very intrigued, and I would enjoy to read more of this work. The fact that ...