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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I am a Woman

    Appreciation is in due to this. Nice. Great job but I thought that there wasn't an ending. I mean I just feel like you should have made it feel like ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Phoenix Poem

    Okay, I liked this poem, but it seemed kind of.....a bit childish. The rhyming was simple and understandable. But I didn't really get at what the title had to do ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Do you? Are you? Can you?

    color=#FF0000]This was really fun to read. Some of it was kind of confusing.[/color] Your expectations of me Has me lifting up this entire world; Going outside the boundaries of my ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Invisible

    I can understand this poem. It was generally pretty good. I was impressed. I disagreed with some of it and I couldn't figure out if you were going for a ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Shatterproof

    I liked this. The wording was excellent but some of it seemed forced. I see you, but I cannot speak to you. We are inches apart, but I cannot touch ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That Sacred Slut

    Amazing. Just utterly astounding. Well, now I sound stuck up so I'll stick with amazing. :) This was very good. It spoke to me and screamed emotion. A few issues ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Running With Music

    This was very moving. I love how you described it. Thrumming, tapping, the music starts to come. Spinning, falling, tugging at my heart and soul. I enjoyed how you started; ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No. 3

    I can't exactly say that I like this. It was unorganized and it didn't fit right to me. But I also can't say I hate it because the message is ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Paint

    This was very good. I liked the flow and the rythm of the words. I think that everyone, sooner or later, feels this way. I liked how you started it. ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Too Ugly

    OMG!! (yes, I used facebook terms, get over it :) ) This was very good. I liked it; it was amazing. I walked down the aisle With roses in my ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Inspiration

    Hey. I liked this. It flowed well and the rhyming was good and very clever. My mind was empty, my soul as well, These first two lines are a good ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'm Sorry

    Hi. I really like the flow of this poem. It was very easy to get into and easy to relate to, as well. I like a lot of the wording ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled

    Hi. I liked this. It's really goot. But I do have a few comments. One: what do you mean to convey with the title? I don't really think it connects ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Own World

    I liked this. It flowed well and I didn't come across much errors. The only lines that I feel were forced, however, were the first two lines. Maybe you could ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No. 9

    I absolutely, positively loved this. It was amazing, powerful, and moving. I found a few, just a few problems (grammarical mostly) in this poem. With the strength of the world ...

    Feb 19, 2011


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