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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I am a Woman

    Appreciation is in due to this. Nice. Great job but I thought that there wasn't an ending. I mean I just feel like you should have made it feel like ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Phoenix Poem

    Okay, I liked this poem, but it seemed kind of.....a bit childish. The rhyming was simple and understandable. But I didn't really get at what the title had to do ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Do you? Are you? Can you?

    color=#FF0000]This was really fun to read. Some of it was kind of confusing.[/color] Your expectations of me Has me lifting up this entire world; Going outside the boundaries of my ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Invisible

    I can understand this poem. It was generally pretty good. I was impressed. I disagreed with some of it and I couldn't figure out if you were going for a ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Shatterproof

    I liked this. The wording was excellent but some of it seemed forced. I see you, but I cannot speak to you. We are inches apart, but I cannot touch ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That Sacred Slut

    Amazing. Just utterly astounding. Well, now I sound stuck up so I'll stick with amazing. :) This was very good. It spoke to me and screamed emotion. A few issues ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Running With Music

    This was very moving. I love how you described it. Thrumming, tapping, the music starts to come. Spinning, falling, tugging at my heart and soul. I enjoyed how you started; ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No. 3

    I can't exactly say that I like this. It was unorganized and it didn't fit right to me. But I also can't say I hate it because the message is ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Paint

    This was very good. I liked the flow and the rythm of the words. I think that everyone, sooner or later, feels this way. I liked how you started it. ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Too Ugly

    OMG!! (yes, I used facebook terms, get over it :) ) This was very good. I liked it; it was amazing. I walked down the aisle With roses in my ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Inspiration

    Hey. I liked this. It flowed well and the rhyming was good and very clever. My mind was empty, my soul as well, These first two lines are a good ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'm Sorry

    Hi. I really like the flow of this poem. It was very easy to get into and easy to relate to, as well. I like a lot of the wording ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled

    Hi. I liked this. It's really goot. But I do have a few comments. One: what do you mean to convey with the title? I don't really think it connects ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Own World

    I liked this. It flowed well and I didn't come across much errors. The only lines that I feel were forced, however, were the first two lines. Maybe you could ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No. 9

    I absolutely, positively loved this. It was amazing, powerful, and moving. I found a few, just a few problems (grammarical mostly) in this poem. With the strength of the world ...

    Feb 19, 2011


You have light and peace inside you. If you let it out, you can change the world around you.
— Uncle Iroh, Avatar the Last Airbender