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Now I'm going to be honest with you for a second, I haven't read the last four chapters of your work. But after reading this one, I really want to, ...

Hey, what I really like about this work is that it is so descriptive and so personal at the same time. I think your poetic voice is truly special and ...

I think that you did something very interesting here. You took a small idea and ran with it, and that's something I truly admire. I do think that the story ...

Hey. This is written beautifully! I am being totally honest. I think you have a way with dialogue--quite a way with dialogue. I also think that you have some very ...

I really like what you did here. Your writing style totally draws me in from the opening sentence. I honestly think the dialogue needs a bit of work, but all ...

I'm gonna be honest here. I think you did a stunningly beautiful job on this piece. I honestly haven't read the other chapters of novel you seem like you've been ...

When you wrote at the end in your little author's note, which I loved, that this only took you ten minutes, I was super shocked, because this probably would have ...

Holy dang was this a crazy one. you did such a good job incorporating so many characters into your story. High praise! Also, I really like what you did with ...

I really like what you did here with this poem. You kept the tone pretty even throughout and didn't get too high or low at any point, which is actually ...

Wow is all I can say after reading this one. I have not read your other chapters, but found this one to be quite a ride. I mean, look, every ...

You did an absolutely amazing job on this poem, I must say. I won't go into critique or specific commenting because I don't think that this piece needs it. But ...

HEy man this piece really spoke to me...like legit. I think you did something truly special with the written word, which I don't see too often. I loved how you ...

WOW! Is all I can say. You hit this one out of the park! I really felt like I could connect with your characters and you painted the picture beautifully. ...

I love this. The only thing is, it's a bit trite. I think the whole religious thing with Jesus and Christianity can get a little overpowering at times throughout this ...

Okay, so honestly, I'm not exactly positive where you were going with this the beginning. But all of a sudden about halfway through, I was just like, oh snap! Now ...