The Rule Of The Alien Queen...

by Eros
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Chapter 5: Cherry Blossom

Vibra came running to my palace. He was panting and breathing hard. 

"Yo-ur Yo-u-r, H-Higghh--ness!" 

"Cool down, Vibra, first take in a slow breath." I said.

Vibra's heartbeats returned to normal and so did his blood pressure.

"Your Highness! They--they saw me!!"

"Who saw you?"

"The people of the Earth!"

"What! When?Where? How?!"

"I was taking a round in the Earth and when I reached above a colony of humans, a beautiful lady caught my eyes. I was lost in her emerald eyes and honey coloured hair and suddenly I heard some little human kids yelling about me thus making me come in the notice of all the other humans present there. They were calling UFO to my Drift Disk."

"What's UFO?" I asked.

"Unidentified Flying Object... I somehow rescued myself and came rushing back to our country. On top, they have clicked my photographs and I am being shown in their Telivisions!!"

"What! I thought, aliens are the only creatures who are so wise.", I continued, "Well... don't worry, humans can do no harm to us. We have magic which they don't."

"For now, you may leave. The court is dismissed." I announced.

"Long Live the Queen! Long live the Queen!"

After a few days, I was patrolling as usual in my Royal Spaceship with the guards. It was day time. Suddenly we heard a strange noise.

"It seems to be coming out of some sort of engine. Be cautious while you drive, Leo." I alerted the guards and Leo.

Suddenly a rocket went speedily from very close to our spaceship. Leo lost the control and we tumbled in the space and were about to fall in the black hole, when suddenly Leo hit the jockey and our spaceship retarded back. 

I heaved a sigh of relief. We were safe. 

"Who were they?" 

"They were humans and they may have come here to explode our country!" Taurus expressed his doubts.

"No. I'll not let this happen. Leo, turn on the invisibility mode and follow their rocket!" I ordered.

We followed their rocket. There were five or six men and one lady. 

When they were halting in some place, we crept inside. They all were sleeping. 

We searched for their identity. The spaceship was known as Columbia.

The lady was Kalpana Chawla, and the names of the men were Brown, Husband, Clark, Anderson, McCool and Ramon.

What if these people have terroristic mind? What if they are here with a purpose of destroying my country? What if they attack my innocent people? What if they make us their slaves and treat us like their servents? What if they establish their rule on us?...

At the same time, I thought... what if I kill them and they prove to be innocent? I would get involved in a crime! I would be defamed---

"Your Highness... What are thinking?" Taurus's words pulled me back from the depth of the thoughts.

"Move back. All of you." I ordered.

Everyone took few steps back. I moved my hands upwards, gathering magical strength and then crossed them in front of my heart. My lips parted a little as I was saying the magical words in my heart. I looked at the sleeping lady, Kalpana Chawla. My eyes emited a beam of light which passed through her body. In the same way, I looked at the other men who were sleeping peacefully. 

I closed my eyes and opened them again. The magic was gone. 

"They are all innocent dudes. We must not harm them." I said. We left the place and returned back to the royal palace.

But to keep the country safe, I made a globe of safety over the whole country. This magical globe induced invisibility over the entire country. Above all, nobody could cross the area covered by the globe.

The next day, the Columbia Spaceship left and we got to know the news that their spaceship got exploded and all of them died in the disaster. I announced a five minute silence and peace in in the country as a tribute to the innocent deads.

After Viba told me that the humans have come to know about our presence, I was a little tensed. I decided to send Vibra again on the Earth. This time, I told him to visit in the night time. During the night, there is peace and everyone would be sleeping. He agreed. 

The next night he was roaming inside the earth. He saw the same lady sleeping peacefully in her house. Vibra couldn't stop himself, he stepped out of the Drift Disk and flew into the house. 

"Ahh! She is a specimen of immense beauty!", he chuckled.

The light of his brain grew brighter and he got an idea. He used his magical powers to go into the dreams of this gorgeous lady.

Vibra looked around and saw the beautiful cherry blossom trees around him. He moved on the smooth road. On the roadside he saw pink fluffy balls attached to the ground by means of round wooden sticks. He went towards one of the plant.

He smelled it."Aaa! Such a sweet smell.", he ate it.

"Hmm... It's so sweet!" He said as he tasted the soft pink fluffy ball of the tree. It was obviously a cotton candy.

He walked further and saw the lady sitting on the bench under a cherry blossom tree. Her long pink dress made a good match with the pink leaves. The surrounding ground was pink because of the withered and fallen leaves of the trees. He went near the lady. 

The lady was taken aback at the sight of Vibra.

"Who are you?" asked the lady.

"Don't be afraid of me... I am V-Vibra... may I know your name, please?" Vibra felt too shy.

"I am Cynthia." The fair lady spoke softly.

Vibra could see his image in her emerald eyes.

"Cynthia... what a sweet name!" 

"Thank you." her fair cheeks showed the color of tomato.

He was lost in Cynthia's honey coloured hair. 

Suddenly his spine got chilled and he instantly vanished. Cynthia was waking up. Vibra ran out of the house and drove his Drift Disk as fas as he could. He had another round inside the Earth and left.

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Edelweiss
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Hey there Eros! Edelweiss here for a review!
Personally I am a huge fan of any form of science fiction, sadly it isn't that popular in novels. Anyway, I really like the idea of this story, despite the fact I haven't read the other chapters, I was still able to grasp the general idea. My favorite character is the queen she seems very leader like and strong.
Though there are a few things you should consider to improve this. Let's get started, the neglect to describe the surroundings. You seem to want to move things by just using dialogue, as a reader it would be more enjoyable to picture where the characters are. You don't have to give a full out description of every room they go in. For example when Viba went into Cynthia's dream here's a good opportunity to give a bit more description. You gave a little but not enough. Was it cold, warm, hot? Was it bright or dark? So forth and so on. Anyway, I just think there should have been much more description of her dream.
Another thing that bothered me was the changing of person, you describe the queen in first person, but switch over to third person with Vibar. If you want to have Vibar's point of view too, stay in third person. I know I haven't read the other chapters but what do the alien's look like? Are they ugly, beautiful, humanoid? Most importantly what is there purpose of going to earth. I understand this is only the 5 chapter, but those are some things to consider.
I think this can be a really wonderful story, and I hope to see more of your works in the future!

-Edelweiss-

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alevine
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alevine wrote a review · Sat Jun 25, 2016 9:02 am

Now I'm going to be honest with you for a second, I haven't read the last four chapters of your work. But after reading this one, I really want to, because this was just so awesome. I loved the suspense and creativity involved in thinking up all of the science fiction stuff. I have no idea how you do it. I wish I could write like this in the sci/fi genre, but I don't think I ever will. I'm more of a well...realistic fiction type of guy. Well, this review was rather long, but I just wanted to cram in how I felt. Keep writing. I look forward to seeing more chapters soon. You truly are a special writer. Always remember that. Ciao!

Thank you so much, alevine!! I am glad that you liked it.
I never thught I could write something in a sci-fi genre... but I was determinant to do it. I am sure if you try to write in sci-fi, you too would be able to write beautifully. Thanks again for such a lovely review! :D
Sure. I'll write more.



To gain your own voice, you have to forget about having it heard.
— Allen Ginsberg