ajruby12

Hey! ajruby here to review! Okay, so constructive stuff first... 1. The punctuation needs some fixing. I know, it's not something you usually worry that much about with lyrics and ...

Hey! ajruby here to review. Okay, so as soon as I saw the title to this, I may or may not have immediately burst out laughing at the idea... Anyway, ...

Hey! ajruby here. Okay, so based off of some of the free verse poetry that I've seen, this is really honestly very good. There are just a couple things that ...

Hey, ajruby here! I really love the imagery that is posed here but just a few suggestions... 1. The flow, even for a free verse, is a bit off here. ...

ajruby here.. Just a few words.. Story. Of. My. Life.. ;) Ha, I love Snickers.... Anyway, getting back to the point.. What exactly does the title have to do with ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! This was another wonderful poem! :) I liked what you're saying with this piece but in a couple places, it seems just a little awkward. ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! Alright, I just loved this! (It's written like a psalm and I gather it was supposed to be like that!) But I love reading the ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! My mind is trying to think up a tune for these lyrics, so excuse me if this doesn't read smoothly.. I really liked this "song", ...

Hey, ajruby here to review! Ok, so my biggest peeve on this piece was the capitalization.. I, for one, have a distaste for what seems to be poor writing form. ...

Hey! ajruby here to review! Ok, so I didn't understand this poem at all.. I couldn't see any basis and it just felt like you coughed up some ideas and ...

Hey! ajruby12 here for a quick review! Ok, one really bad problem was grammar. The numerous mistakes made it very difficult to read. Also, punctuation wasn't clear either. If you ...

Hey! ajruby12 here! Alright, technical mistakes first.. "and for a good reason: he was" ""Oh on, no mom please?" "the sensible get-a-plan heroin, isn't she. But if sh truly loves ...

Hey! ajruby12 here for a review! Ok, I loved the imagery on this and all the description you used, but just one thing. What's the point??? I personally like to ...

Hey! ajruby12 here! (I meant to do this review a while ago but didn't get around to it..) Ok, first off... I noticed in multiple areas that you ran two ...

Hey! ajruby12 here to review! I really liked this story! (I need to look up the original and compare the two.) I think you did a great job in the ...