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Hey, AJ here! Ooh... This is cool! Personally, I'm a little more of a stickler on poetic style, but I try to loosen up about that every once in a ...

Hey-yo, AJ here for a quick review! Wow... This is a cool poem. Honestly, I don't know that I've personally experienced the feelings in this poem, but I certainly know ...

Hey, AJ here for a quick review! I confess, I only was able to skim the prologue and chapter one, but this story is fantastic! The timing is good and ...

Hey, AJ here for a quick review! Ooooh... I like this. A lot. It's simplistic, but it has a lot of weight to it. I just have a couple thoughts. ...

Hey, AJ here for a quick review! This looks really interesting! I know it's short, but I'd love to read more of this story. Here are just a few suggestions. ...

Hey, AJ here! I was just scrolling through the Green Room and noticed this didn't have any reviews, so I thought I'd drop on by. I don't really have much ...

Hey, AJ here! This poem really touched me... I haven't experienced a loved one's death yet, but a good friend of mine's dad passed away a couple years ago, and ...

Hey, AJ here for a review! I really like this idea! It's different, but still interesting. Just a couple things... - "And- the weight of their bodies resting like boulders" ...

Hey! AJ here! (I haven't written an essay yet this school year, so I'll consider this a refresher course!) First, a few "tears" in the fabric of your happiness: - ...

Hey, AJ here! I saw your chapter title and was immediately interested! (And you also reviewed my chapter) First, some technical stuff. - The wording seems a little odd on ...

Hey! AJ here for a quick review. OK... So, I like the simplicity of this piece. However, it seems a little too basic and empty. The style of this reminds ...

Hey! AJ here to review. You have a lovely poem here! I love some of those lines. I like that you brought it closer to home for people with the ...

Hey! AJ here to review! I've gotta say, I often fall for fun/humorous poetry. I enjoyed reading through this a lot. However, I have a couple suggestions. First, you need ...

Hey, AJ dropping by. I saw a lot of repetition. I would suggest less repetition. Less repetition would be better, so you shouldn't have so much repetition. (OK, serious now) ...

This isn't really a review, since I couldn't find a single thing wrong with this... :) As you might be able to tell by my poems, I love humorous, light ...