adriangarcia

Well, you know the way to my heart-- short, sweet, and simple! And, that's exactly what this poem was. I absolutely adore this! And, I can totally tell it was ...

Short, sweet, and to the point! It's a winner in my book! On the other hand, it's a bit... of a tiring subject. And, the phrasing is a bit... predictable. ...

Thanks everyone for all the kind words! I will most definitely use everyone's criticism for my next revision! Be on the look out for new work and revision from me!

Wow! I had no idea I was missed. LOL! I've actually not been feeling "inspired" enough to turn out any substantial poems. Hence, the disappearance! This is about Britney Spears. ...

Hahahaha! That was hilarious! I hear my mom say stuff like this all the time! I hear it sooo much that I could become a wife right now if I ...

Thank you so much for your review! I actually wasn't planning on a positive review as I've never been much of a prose writer. I see everything you've said, and ...

I am a HUGE fan of repetition. If you've seen any of my poetry, you'd know that I am! However, it seems as if this whole poem crutches on it ...

Seriously, this is one of the cutest poems I've read! Very, very sweet! :) And, good too! -Adrian

I loved "the Lottery." Jackson wrote an amazing short story! I highly suggesting reading this. BTW, if I remember correctly she wrote this for the New York Times. It caused ...

Your stanzas are very, very choppy. It made it hard to get into at first. But, it was a good poem. I liked it. Short, simple, and sweet! However, the ...

I usually don't like poems of this nature. But, it was quite good. You got what you wanted to say across and that's an accomplishment in itself. There were some ...

It doesn't. :) -Adrian

Now, I have to defend myself. RAWR: You keep saying you write out of what you feel and think which is what "emo" is. You're, my friend, mistaking "emo" with ...

I had no idea it was about a "drug trip." -Adrian

That's fine that it's your first poem. If you read my first poem "I Coughed Once for God" you will see faults in it. That's why you post these on ...