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Re: The Rage (Chapter 19)
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Dec 13, 2020
, been a while since I've read one of these. You captured their personalities; Jeff is still the Jeff everyone hates loves, Ben likes video games because he was originally ... -
Re: The whole beginning
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Dec 13, 2020
The first thing is about tense. As another reviewer noted, there are a couple of times in this story where the tense flipped between present and past, but it looks ... -
Re: That face...
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Dec 13, 2020
Ah, been a while since I've read one of these. You captured their personalities; Jeff is still the Jeff everyone hates loves, Ben likes video games because he was originally ... -
Re: Hostage - A Creepypasta story
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Dec 13, 2020
Ah, been a while since I've read one of these. You captured their personalities; Jeff is still the Jeff everyone hates loves, Ben likes video games because he was originally ... -
Re: someone watching her
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: Call Me
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: the moon rides high
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: Silhouette of Cornflowers
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: Dissimilarity: Preview (1-16)
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: HeadCanon Series
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: Bars
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 3
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: i'm an overused character trope
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 4, Part 1
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ... -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 4, Part 2
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Dec 13, 2020
This is something so stunning and never in my life have I seen such writing. Your flow and sentence structure are amazing and you have made great impressions on the ...