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Zawaa

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: You

    This is very fresh and unique! It's so true that we are oblivious of the bounties of life. However, I did pick up a few grammatical errors such as the ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window

    Hi there, wow this is such a fresh perspective on rain really wonderful. I can almost feel the fear you feel, it's tough to create an atmosphere through writing and ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stubborn

    Heyy Wow this is lovely! I was especially intrigued by the silhouette of the poem, very unusual but highly effective. My favorite part is "We are stubborn You and I ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: Blank

    Hi there Okay a few adjectives to describe this piece: Beautiful, unique, simple, feel-good, awakening... I really love how you've captured the essence of life's simple moments and made them ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Once is Never Enough

    Oh my word... This is absolute genius! I'm not sure if it's the poet in you or the person that means this piece so wonderful. So relatable to any writer, ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: you were hidden by shadows

    Hi there, here to review briefly :) Okay, the beginning is stunning "You were hidden by the shadows" - just reminds me of the chorus to my favorite love song ...

    Sep 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, General Re: The Passing of Time

    Wow okay let's see... I really love the beginning, extremely gripping. My favorite line was probably "No more does yesterday count as today or tomorrow" - Highly insightful! Some lovely ...

    Sep 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Blank Page

    Wow this was absolutely beautiful! I actually have no right to review a writer of your caliber but anyways I'll just leave a little thought. My favorite part of the ...

    Jul 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: -

    Hello there :) Okay this poem led me on very nicely, i expected a bang! Pollution, war, something terrifying but the "you just missed me" part was sort of an ...

    Jul 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: It Hurts Me For You Not To Stay

    Hey there, Okay here goes... My favorite thing about this poem is the simplicity of it, always very effective. Also the flow is quite excellent which makes for an enjoyable ...

    Jul 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Review Re: The River and The coin

    Hi there, this is very different and relatable! I mean who hasn't placed a dream into a coin at some time or the other? I especially enjoyed your usage of ...

    Jul 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: we are not/we are

    This sounds to me like the thoughts of an optimist, truly a breath of fresh air after all the suicidal poetry we see nowadays... Anyways back to the writing, excellent ...

    Jul 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Alone

    Hi there, My very first review, so please mind the amateur technique... The poem was absolutely divine to read. Not only did it capture the true roughness of human behavior ...

    Jul 17, 2013


october smells like being ten years old and not scared of anything
— dissonance