Zackymas

Hi, this is going to be a short review so let's just get right to it! First of all, this is a really nice descriptive text! I think you'll do ...

Eyo mate. I'm back from the dead to review thine piece~. So as was said before me, your opening paragraph is strong. I like it introduces the characters, but at ...

Here for a short review~ Foremost, I think your message would've traveled across better if this was a poem. The nature of it makes one read it that way. And ...

Okay so I'm here to give you a short review~ "I was sleeping when I heard a panicked voice." It's usually a rule of thumb to never have your MC ...

Heyo there~ After months of hiatus... me is here for a review \o/ Okay so this short story starts with a bit of 'dialogue' supposed to introduce us to what's ...

Wello hello, I shalt give a rather small review to this piece of poetry. Let's begin shall we~ " "I collect things," and people." Here I think placing 'and people' ...

Bonjour Mon amie~ Okay I'm to review this beautiful piece :3 This is gonna be short because most points were covered by other reviewers (and I'm writing from my phone ...

Hello ello there, I'm here to review this piece of narrative (Flash fiction, son). Let's begin shall we? It's interesting how you portray freedom. From what I see, this is ...

Ello hello there :3 I'd like to review this chapter :D Let's begin shall we? Okay so I haven't read the previous chapters yet so I won't mention anything regarding ...

Ello hello there :3 I'm here to review this small fragment of narrative. Let's begin shall we? So I'd like to begin by saying that this is a very well ...

Ello hello there mate :3 I see you are new so first of all: Welcome :D Now now, I'm here to review this little poem of yours. Let's begin shall ...

Ello hello there~ Je suis ici pour revue ton recit~ (I hope I got that right) Well it's a pretty neat story that you've got here. Kuddos for the original ...

Oh my God YESSS! XD This is the kind of essays I love. I was actually thinking on making something like this, thanks for doing it my friend. I totally ...

Okay, I'm here just to make a short review on this work. Shalt we begin? :v This is going to be a rather short review, for what I'm going to ...

Ello hello there. I'm to review this poem. Sorry if it's too short or something, I don't like to get lengthy. So let's begin shall we? First of all, I ...