Yuriiko

Hello there, hero! First of all, this lyric was good and interesting to accompany with an acoustic guitar. The idea was quite enjoyable and every line connects to each other. ...

hello there, creative! Well you do have a creative mind. :D The poem was very emotional. The flow was good and it connects to every line. "Walks away smuggly"? or ...

Hello there, Naydy and welcome to YWS! :D First of all and honestly, I didn't like this story. :wink: (sorry) "Curiousvampire" had it already for the corrections. Things that made ...

Hello there, Ross! Your lyric's emotional and deep. Based from my perspective, it expresses so much feelings of jealousy and depression. I like this! While I was reading this, I ...

Hello there, All! One thing: i may love you to - shouldn't it be "too"? Anyways, I like the concept of it, it was really good. It was easy to ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! First of all, the concept of your poem and it's emotion throughout the poem really shows. Almost everything or all, seemed to rhymed well. ...

I can't stop laughing! I loved everything from beginning until the end. It was funny! Make more parodies, please! hehehe. I really loved the chorus part! Keep up the good ...

Hello there! As for my point of view... I like your poem. It was short and very emotional. But one thing: Why is the girl feeling pain at all? Is ...

Hello there! This lyrics's kind of sweet. It's like it was Gabriella and Troy in HSM singing this.lol Anyways, I like this. It's a good one for a duet but ...

Hello there! Your lyric's fine and good actually. :D "They way he looked at her.... it tore me a-part" - shouldn't "They" be "The"? I think it's just a typo ...

Hello there, Hero! One thing: "And lessons learned to the future..."- I don't get it? Should it be um... "for"? Anyways, I loved your totally unique idea and concept of ...

Hello there, x3! I like the concept and the idea of your poem. The poem's nice and clean because of how you rhyme, it's good. The flow of the emotions ...

Hello, Lala! I liked this kind of story because I like dramatic and sad endings.hehe. Your story was great and you described well the characters. But one thing, how did ...

Hello there! Hey, I could see that your lyric is all about a person who loves 2 persons but she can't decide well 'cause she really love both of the.... ...

hey there, LittlePet! I liked your poem. The rhyming's good and the concept of "Escape" was really obvious to the fact that it was the "emotion" flowing throughout the poem. ...