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Good Enough

by Ross


GOOD ENOUGH

Hold on, I need to stop myself
Don’t wanna bleed if no one’s there
You were like a fairy tale
And then I found out you don’t care

Right now I’m on the edge
You’re pushing me away
I’m not sure I understand
Why you’re not here today

Chorus:
Give me a reason why you’re not there
But it might just not be enough
Give me a reason why you exposed yourself
Then left your heart in my hands
You need to come back
And clean up your mess
Give me a reason why I search for you
And think I’m not good enough
I’m not good enough

Hold on, all the tears from last night
They didn’t erase all the anger and pain
I’m so confused, you knock me off
Don’t act like you care ‘cause you see the end

Right now I’m on the edge
You’re pushing me away
I’m not sure I understand
Why you’re not here today

Chorus:
Give me a reason why you’re not there
But it might just not be enough
Give me a reason why you exposed yourself
Then left your heart in my hands
You need to come back
And clean up your mess
Give me a reason why I search for you
And think I’m not good enough

Bridge:
All I’ve ever wanted
Was someone to save me
Someone to be there
Time and time again
But it might be too late
Without a reason
You don’t think
I’m good enough

Give me a reason why you’re not there
But it might not be enough
Give me a reason why you’re not there
But it might just not be enough
Give me a reason why you exposed yourself
Then left your heart in my hands
You need to come back
And clean up your mess
Give me a reason why I search for you
And think I’m not good enough
I’m not good enough

I’m not good enough
I’m not good enough
I’m not good enough
I’m never enough


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Fri May 07, 2010 3:36 am



Hello! your lyrics are really good. I love the whole flow of the words. :D




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Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:48 am
Yuriiko wrote a review...



Hello there, Ross!

Your lyric's emotional and deep. Based from my perspective, it expresses so much feelings of jealousy and depression. I like this! While I was reading this, I was thinking of an acoustic music playing.

Keep up the good work. :D

Peace out!




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Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:32 am
SisterItaly wrote a review...



I like this, its very deep! You are very good at this. I'm new on this site so my opinion probably doesn't matter but i really do like this. I could hear the music as i read this. You have that special something to make it work. Lucky! This piece is getting like by me right away!




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Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:51 am
Hydey says...



This song is very unrestricted to what kinds of music you can make it into. I can see it being a successful country or pop song.




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Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:25 am



Oh, wow! I really loved this! I could totally imagine the guitar that could go with this. You're so epic like FTWinwinwinwinwinwin!


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Fri Mar 12, 2010 4:56 pm
life_is_for_living wrote a review...



What kind of music did you have in mind going under this? I liked the repetition at the end and the chorus then the bridge and the chorus again. I thought that added to the repetition at the end, stressing the point of the song. :smt001





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