Yuriiko

Hello there! The poem depicted the feelings and the thoughts of the narrator here. I too agree with Snoink. You only describe the rush of emotions throughout the poem without ...

Hello there, Snoink! Totally awesome and funny! The plot's so unique and the characters are so hilarious! You totally made my day! BETH Officially, this “town” is a city. So ...

Hello there! I like it. As what "Dante92" said, I too feel calm and at peace when I began reading this. I like the first stanza until the last one. ...

Hello there! This was an interesting piece. You demonstrated the girl's perspective and placed her emotions, reactions and how she showed her deep affection for the boy. Also, I love ...

Hello there! That was sad for me. I just love reading sad endings like this one. I liked the beginning until the end, 'cause there was this kind of a ...

Hello there, july! Nice and it was a direct poem. The rhyming was well done and so with the flow to it. Why do you want, to control my life? ...

Hello there! That was nice. I liked the thought of "Un-Beautiful". It was a totally an exceptional title. Even if there were no rhyme scheme to it, the flow had ...

Hello there! That was a pleasant and an emotional poem. I liked the flow and the way how you wrote it. :) See how your eyes are colder, Your hands ...

Hello there, Just Dance! You really made me cry. That was short but so sweet. :wink: I could feel your deep affection for her. From those particular tree and candle ...

Hello there and Welcome to YWS! :D First of all, I liked your rhyming scheme because everything seemed to rhyme well. I enjoyed the flow from the beginning until the ...

Hello there! I somehow agreed with "Loveable". Anyways, I liked the concept of how you portrayed the main character's feelings at the start. I could feel my heart breaking, pain ...

Hello there, Sunstar! I really liked it. The concept and the idea of your poem was totally unique. There are just some things that made me disturbed. One, rhyme scheme. ...

Hello there and Welcome to YWS! That's for sure short but cute. I like the concept and the idea of your poem. Remember, you need to always capitalize "I". That's ...

Hello there, Chaos! :) Honestly, your story's quite uninteresting especially on the beginning. You need to put a good start so that you could catch the attention of the readers. ...

Hello there, knight! I like how you begin with your first line, it's interesting. It would automatically catch the reader's attention. The flow of the poem and the rhyme scheme ...