Published April 24, 2010
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I can feel tears coming...
Hello there, Just Dance!
You really made me cry. That was short but so sweet.
I could feel your deep affection for her. From those particular tree and candle service I could really tell she was something special. I really liked this.
Peace out!
wow this is amazing made me cry i could imagine every word you wrote hope you the best
Hi JD.
This was really sweet. I'm literally holding back tears right now. I can tell you loved this girl. She sounds like a really sweet girl, and I feel for her loss, even though I never knew her. I wish I did. One thing I think you could expand on is the words you use to describe her at the end? Expand upon those! It will make the letter seem all the more sweeter.
PM me if you have any questions, and I hope things work out.
-Elinor xo