Yuriiko

Hello there, Isha! I have finally figured out what I'm viewed as in life. Good start. I actually have to read this twice, trying to find out a mistake, it ...

Hello there! Great piece. I was going to nitpick or critique this but then I noticed... hmm... there are no grammar mistakes or anything that needs to be corrected. :wink: ...

Hello there! Wonderful poem. :D It was short but really good. I like it how your formatting makes a "lamp" figure. I could get the message through the poem. One ...

Hello there! Interesting story. As what others stated, you're good at dialogues. It makes your story a little bit realistic and was understandable from the start until the end. You ...

Hello there! The sun blazed high in the sky, the waves crashed gently against the rocks and the sand turned black! nice description and a good start :) It was ...

Hello there! This is very interesting. I could see the message behind the poem. First of all, your rhyming scheme was good, some parts though were kind of forced, just ...

Hello there! I totally like this! :D It wasn't expressive to the point that you are really crazy for one person but it really tells how much you cared for ...

Hello there! This is like a random short love story but I like it. :) Matt paced through the corridors of his mind. A good start in here. Maybe rephrase ...

Hello there, Ikafe! This lyric's totally emotional and deep for one whose heart became broken. I love the flow, the feelings going on and on. It slaps you, It kicks ...

Hello there! Here to review. :wink: Errors in red. Comments in blue. Wee woo wee woo wee woo P.J. ran around the living room making firetruck noises, drowning out the ...

Hello there, Shubhi! Here to review as requested. Many reviews have pretty covered up all those mistakes already so I won't bother with it anymore. I'll just have to comment ...

Hello there! Here to review as requested. :mrgreen: Characters: I like how you portray your two main characters differently to each other. Also, it was kind of a biblical name. ...

Hello there! I really like your lyrics. It' so sweet. I like how you placed a rhyme scheme in it. My only nightmare is losing you. But you're my dream ...

Hello there, Shubhi! Here to review as requested. :D “You should take them now. I’ll give those to you (delete space) . (space here) Wait here,” she had a command ...

Hello there! Here to review as requested. :wink: Wings fluttered and shimmered, (space here) outfits sparkled and faces glowed on what everyone, including the bride-to-be, hoped would be her last ...