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I really appreciate your reviews and I hope that you continue to real the rest of this story. Your input has been most helpful in working a few things out. ...

Glad to hear that you figured it out quickly. How did you like the transformation scene?

Check out the rest of the chapter parts then.

Thank you for your review. I always appreciate them. To address some of your statements I will go through them one at a time. Re'ana's character is very flat. I ...

Yes he is in a library and he is checking out a book to take him. I know that it seemed confusing but that was sort of the point. Each ...

Thank you for the review. I always appreciate when people leave them for me. I'm glad that you liked it. I was doing a writing exercise about describing a specific ...

I meant him looking in a mirror after he has been told that it was him. He was checking everyone elses hands and mouth. Sort of seemed to fit when ...

There are definitely a few typos in this story and I appreciate you pointing them out. I plan on writing down your suggestions and correcting them promptly. Believe it or ...

I'm glad you liked the story so much. And I am not gonna lie. Grammar is my Achilles Heel. I have never been good at it. What I need is ...

So this was a sort of summary for you to get your ideas out there? I do the same thing.

While I found your review very inspiring I can't say that I really understand what it means to the story itself. I guess that I am not fully understanding why ...

I always have the belief that if you feel that it needs something more then so will the readers. If you wouldn't read it then neither will anyone else. A ...

Sure that sounds great.

Thank you very much for your review. I wanted to keep the "Someone" as something left up to the reader to fill in. As I couldn't find a better way ...

I'm glad that you're starting to like reana. The truth is that in a short time she is going to have an attitude adjustment. How did you like the transformation?