Xreigon

I am not the best person to ask to edit poetry, but I have decided that I can try. :) I think that this is a good little rant. All ...

I enjoyed your poem. It seemed to have a old-timey feel from the language that you used. I enjoyed this. I would, however say that the flow of the poem ...

I really enjoyed your poem. It seemed to have emotion behind the words and you did a good job of making that come through. There were only two little things ...

Okay. This is quite well written! Besides a couple of comas that are left out, your sentence structure is pretty good and it flows well! (Note: If you are connecting ...

This is a good start of a cute little story. You did a good job of creating interest in the mermaids, and I since don't know what Welkinmaids are, that ...

So...there is a formatting thing that could help with the delivery of this poem. In some of your stanzas, you capitalized the word at the beginning of the line and ...

This is really beautiful. There are not many nitpicks that I can say, but I would just point out that it is a little varied. Some of the lines and ...

Wow. That was beautiful. I really really enjoyed your story and you did a very good job of editing it. I am sad for Roselyn and the war that she ...

Hmm. I have a few things to say about this, just as general advice. Your dog's grammer is atrocious, but is that the way that you are wanting it to ...

Awwww! I loved this next section. Your story is really developing in good ways and I am captivated. I do have to point out a few nit-picks though, because thats ...

No, no , no, no! This can't happen! They need to stay undercover! ...Hmmm, very interesting. I love the controversy between the characters!! It think that the story is getting ...

That was very interesting. I like the whole seeing ghosts thing, plus the fact that the ghost has a great sense of humor. It There was one little nit-pick that ...

Wow. This is heavy. It deals with the big issue of sucide that is in our culture nowadays. Its so sad and terrible. I really hope that this poem was ...

Hmmm. An interesting perspective. I hadn't thought about things this way and I seem to be one of the "brainless-girls", though I think that Justin Bieber is pretty ridiculous nad ...

Wow. This is terrible. It was really sad and I feel as if I don't want to hear any more, because I don't want anything else to happen. You did ...