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I don't know why the lines are so separated. Tried to fix it but couldn't. Sorry about that. If you notice anymore mistakes, PLEASE tell me =D

"I love you like Edward loves Bella." I think that's my favorite line =D Other than that and the few grammar mistakes that everyone else already corrected, it was awesome. ...

That was cute =] Poor him at the beginning though.

Hey everyone. Thanks for reviewing and telling me what I did wrong =] That is actually one of my first poems. I haven't written many

Heh. This was awesome :)

I liked it. A lot. The only part I didn't like was the first stanza, but even that wasn't too bad :)

:lol: I loved this!! Don't get me wrong, I love Stephenie Meyer, but this was just hilarious. Keep it up!

:) There were a few grammatical mistakes, but other than that, it was really good.

It was all good, except for that tiny spelling mistake :)

I like it a lot. I really can't criticize, because it seems that everyone got here before me =] It was pretty good. Oh, BTW, thanks for the blog comment ...

Wow. This is even better than the first one I reviewed. I love it!!

Well, personally, I think it was great! I really did like it. I especially liked the last two lines "She waits and waits by the ocean, For a newly opened ...