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Hiya, CaptainSaltWater! I have returned to review this lovely second installment of "The Summoning!" I really like the direction you are taking with this, especially by including some temptation. I ...

Hey there again, Tuesday! I assume your old user was CapitalMonday since I see that in the comment section below. This was a very odd poem, but I liked it. ...

Hello, Tuesday! I am curious about your choice of username, but that's not what we're focusing on here. Our topic is your beautiful sonnet that I am going to review, ...

Hi there Tigerlilly37. I hope Frank isn't bothering you. This will be a short review since I couldn't really find anything wrong with it. I think the title matches this ...

Hi there again Tigerlilly37. I hope you decided to keep Frank. Anyway, there's one thing I found kinda odd about this poem. You said "Countless" and then ended with "Counting ...

Hi there Tigerlilly37. I'm going to roll around and cry miserably. Okay? Okay. Honestly though, I don't see any mistakes with the piece. I don't know what the crazy people ...

Hello, steampowered! Before I start, I have a quick question. You do not have to answer it if you do not have the time, but I wanted to ask if ...

Hello random stranger that I actually know! I am going to review you, okay? Okay. I wanted to start off saying that I noticed you classified this as "horror." It ...

Hello, Gune! I'm going to start with saying that I really like how you introduce this with a quote. It prepares the reader in an interesting way by using words ...

Hello, donizback! It's really cool to review the top reviewer, and seeing you have over 5000 points, you should be proud of yourself! Now, let's review your poem! This is ...

Hello, WrittenEdge! I'm sorry to say I haven't read your prologue yet, so I'm somewhat confused, but I'll get to that after reviewing this. This story seems pretty interesting so ...

Hi there, JoytheBrave! I believe I've reviewed your poem Eclipse before, and let me just start with saying that you're really good with poetry. You have a certain way of ...

Hello, sharoze! I liked this piece a lot, and I felt like it was sort of a reflection of how people long for things in a selfish manner while going ...

Hello, kevin25a! This story had a good concept, though there were a few mistakes I found. Don't let that drag you down, though. Keep writing, and get better! With that ...

Hello there, Verser! I like your poem, so let's get on to the reviewing, shall we? This poem was short but pleasant. However, I found it odd you only capitalized ...