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  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: The Three Days That Would Have Been Different

    Hello, confetti (in love with your username, by the way)! I really, really enjoyed this piece. By the first sentence, you already had me drawn in to your story. Your ...

    Jan 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Disputatores- Chapter 2

    Hello, ChocolateCello! I wanted the mention first and foremost that I have not read the first chapter, but I plan on doing so. The story seems very interesting so far, ...

    Sep 27, 2015

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other
    Re: Exclusively For You

    Hello there, Stegosaurus! I really loved this poem, especially the meaning behind it. It was very 'cutsie' but also had a lot of truth behind it, and the way you ...

    Sep 22, 2015

  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic
    Re: Into the Sea

    Hello, Hannawrites! I'm absolutely in love with the beach, so I really liked this story. The ending, if I deciphered it correctly, was somewhat a twist, though we could sort ...

    Jun 1, 2015

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Why?

    Hello, CaptainSaltWater! This is somewhat old but I'm going to review it now. I really like this piece because I really do feel like it captures what society is today. ...

    May 31, 2015

  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Humor
    Re: In Protest for an Easier English

    Hello, Odd! Yes, this is about three days old and I am only NOW coming to review it. I have to say, I found this pretty darn hilarious. I've grown ...

    May 31, 2015

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Flower

    Hello, IncohesiveScribbles! I really like this poem, especially the meaning behind it. There were no problems that I could approach. It was rather short, but it definitely got its point ...

    May 31, 2015

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The mind of music

    Hello, paula08! I have arrived to do a review on this poem (which is surprisingly sitting in the green room) and definitely should be getting a lot more attention. As ...

    May 24, 2015

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: it was her smile

    Hello, Arathorth! I partially saw the twist coming. Well, I guess you could call it a "twist." Either way, this was I really lovely yet emotional poem. I feel like ...

    May 12, 2015

  • Poetry » General, Other
    Re: The Violin Bow

    Hello, rhane118! I really liked this poem, especially because I was considering playing the violin. Just a random question, and if you do not have time to respond, I will ...

    Apr 25, 2015

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General
    Re: The Glass Floor

    Hello, Wolfare1! I hope you are having an enjoyable review day! I love this poem. I think it's a brilliant way of showing how everyone has faults, and no one ...

    Apr 25, 2015


  • Hello, Flite! If I remember correctly, you are an outstanding writer, and I am very honored to be able to review you for review day! Since I can't find any ...

    Apr 25, 2015

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical
    Re: Marionette

    Hello there, speakerskat! I hope you are having a wonderful review day. You are my first review for the April Review day, so let's get right to it! I love ...

    Apr 25, 2015

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General
    Re: Cuts

    Hi, CaptainSaltWater! You already know me, so let's skip the introduction. This poem seems to be getting a lot of bad reviews for some reason. I noticed that Monsters was ...

    Apr 16, 2015

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: so cliched!

    Hello, DivineFool! Well, this won't be much of a review since there are absolutely 0 mistakes that I could find in this poem, but I just thought I would at ...

    Apr 12, 2015


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