WritingforHim99

Hello! Wow. This was really heartbreaking and touching, and beautiful, all rolled into one short story. If you've ever lost a loved one (which I have) you can definitely relate. ...

Hello there! So, not a lot of people can weave together a poem, without really rhyming, and with just a few simple words bring together a painting in the mind. ...

COOL!!! OH MY GOODNESS! I love this poem!! Wow. All I can say is that it was all I had hoped it would be when you said you wrote it ...

Hi there! I like your poem. And I like the way, as Dusk mentioned too, you spoke directly to the reader. It made me think. :) And it almost had ...

Cool poem! It's simplistic, and it gets the message across without being wordy. And you kinda captured the feel of the beach -- like when you're there, everything just seems ...

Hey! I like this poem a lot! You tell us what all your interests are (you have a lot of them) and I like the way you do it. You ...

Hi there! You have a good work here. Said with the simple prose of a child who just wants parental love. :) Not an overcomplicated piece, just sweet and simple. ...

Wow. I can totally relate to every line, every word, every thought in this poem. You've written an excellent piece that captures the essence of shyness, how it eats away ...

HI! Good job with this poem. I'm a little lost as to what the subject matter is, but sometimes I'm not a very deep thinker (lol) so that may be ...

Great poem/short story! ;) I really like the imagery you've painted here. Even in such a short paragraph, you've given the poem (and I must say, it does feel like ...