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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Undying Passion

    Ooh, this is a treat! I really enjoyed reading this. I specifically like the tone you used. It seemed to fit well with theme of the poem. However, the lines ...

    Jun 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: No Sleeping.

    I actually liked this. I don’t even know why, so I can’t tell you. But what I CAN tell you, is that this poem really has a meaning to it. ...

    Jun 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What can you do?

    Thank you for the writing this. It really made my day. I’d just like to drop by for a review, sharing my thoughts on this poem. I like the feeling ...

    Jun 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 21st of April

    I really like this! Although it doesn't quite flow as I think a poem should, it is easy to read and based on a nice topic. One thing I’d like ...

    Jun 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Yellow.

    Ooh, I like this. A lot. I really like the descriptions of love. It is so true. I also really like the repition of, “Loving her is...” It makes it ...

    May 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Oh shooey!

    Wonderful. This really made my day. The sheer humour behind it is brilliant. I love the words and the thing about the boot is awesome. However, at the end there ...

    May 27, 2018
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Ziva Beaver - a children's story

    I liked this for a few reasons. The “be careful what you wish for” message came through bold and clear. Ziva’s strangeness makes her a very likeable character, in my ...

    May 27, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: All I Hear is Cheering

    Hi! I’m going to review your poem for you! First of all, I really liked it. I’m going to go through the poem and offer my suggestions. I heard my ...

    May 27, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spring Storm

    I like this piece. I love the way you have centered it and the personification is brilliant. I also like the rhymes. I think you did those very well. The ...

    May 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Our Nature

    I like this poem and it was obviously quite hard for you to write, so well done. I like the fact it is so short and straightforward. I also like ...

    May 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: education is important

    This is really good. I like the way it is set up. It makes it really obvious that it is a conversation and I agree with the points you make ...

    May 20, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Ever-Changing Sky

    I love this piece! It seems so beautiful and realistic. As I read it, I realised how true your words actually are. To be honest, I wasn’t expecting this to ...

    May 19, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ticking Away

    I like the metaphors and poetic features in this! What strikes me is the way you described everything so vividly. I just love that. I think everything is a little ...

    May 19, 2018
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Eleven Days

    I enjoyed reading this because of the way it was written. I liked how it started as a family in an airport picking up an American boy. Then I liked ...

    May 19, 2018


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein