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Re: Undying Passion
Ooh, this is a treat! I really enjoyed reading this. I specifically like the tone you used. It seemed to fit well with theme of the poem. However, the lines ...
Jun 4, 2018 -
Re: No Sleeping.
I actually liked this. I don’t even know why, so I can’t tell you. But what I CAN tell you, is that this poem really has a meaning to it. ...
Jun 3, 2018 -
Re: What can you do?
Thank you for the writing this. It really made my day. I’d just like to drop by for a review, sharing my thoughts on this poem. I like the feeling ...
Jun 2, 2018 -
Re: 21st of April
I really like this! Although it doesn't quite flow as I think a poem should, it is easy to read and based on a nice topic. One thing I’d like ...
Jun 1, 2018 -
Re: Yellow.
Ooh, I like this. A lot. I really like the descriptions of love. It is so true. I also really like the repition of, “Loving her is...” It makes it ...
May 30, 2018 -
Re: Oh shooey!
Wonderful. This really made my day. The sheer humour behind it is brilliant. I love the words and the thing about the boot is awesome. However, at the end there ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Ziva Beaver - a children's story
I liked this for a few reasons. The “be careful what you wish for” message came through bold and clear. Ziva’s strangeness makes her a very likeable character, in my ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: All I Hear is Cheering
Hi! I’m going to review your poem for you! First of all, I really liked it. I’m going to go through the poem and offer my suggestions. I heard my ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Spring Storm
I like this piece. I love the way you have centered it and the personification is brilliant. I also like the rhymes. I think you did those very well. The ...
May 20, 2018 -
Re: Our Nature
I like this poem and it was obviously quite hard for you to write, so well done. I like the fact it is so short and straightforward. I also like ...
May 20, 2018 -
Re: education is important
This is really good. I like the way it is set up. It makes it really obvious that it is a conversation and I agree with the points you make ...
May 20, 2018 -
Re: The Ever-Changing Sky
I love this piece! It seems so beautiful and realistic. As I read it, I realised how true your words actually are. To be honest, I wasn’t expecting this to ...
May 19, 2018 -
Re: Ticking Away
I like the metaphors and poetic features in this! What strikes me is the way you described everything so vividly. I just love that. I think everything is a little ...
May 19, 2018 -
Re: Eleven Days
I enjoyed reading this because of the way it was written. I liked how it started as a family in an airport picking up an American boy. Then I liked ...
May 19, 2018
