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  • Article / Essay » Review, Realistic Re: Song Review-The Way You Felt (Alec Benjamin)

    Hi Pineapple! I haven't really written many reviews before, but we're all learning as we go right? I think this was an great, short article with many interesting facts. Your ...

    Feb 16, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Dragon Rider Chapter 1

    Okay!!! Hello, here I am to write you Great authors a review!! I realt like the story, it’s fin parts, a little boring part’s (for Richard) I only noticed one ...

    Jan 17, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Hate You

    Hello darling! Sad about your B. bla bla bla bla bla bla..... Oh Wait, I can just write in norwegian!! Bla bla bla... trist at du føler sånn, IKKE ENGANG ...

    Jan 15, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pounding Beats

    Jan 13, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Bright

    hey! Here I am to review your wonderful poem! I think this is my new favorite poem!!!!!!! I just love all the lines, and the hole meaning of the poem. ...

    Jan 13, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Horror Re: Danger on the dance floor

    Hello! Here I am, WriterSister33 to read your story, and to give a comment!:);) So this was a very grat story! I think I scould write something inspired of one ...

    Nov 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Lotus flower

    Hello! I’m WriterSister33. Here to review your poem;) I really liked this poem!!:) I think lotus flowers are beautiful! This poem may a little short, but its still beautiful:) It ...

    Nov 20, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Fighter and the Dragon Chapter 2

    This Is a good story!! I am looking forward to read more of the story! You might wanna write who is talking when, when it is the conversation beetween Phee ...

    Nov 16, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: A young spy and a young cop-chapter 5

    Hey! This chapter was full of creativity! (Not that the other ones wheren’t:)) It’s a drink woman, a party, maybe a new job... You are a very great author! I ...

    Nov 16, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A young spy and a young cop-Chapter 4

    Hi! I just LOVE this story!!!!!!!! It’s good that you have taken some more charakters in the story!:) This chapter ended when it was very exiting, and that’s What that ...

    Nov 6, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: The Clown

    Wow! It was so thrilling to read, I could feel it down my back! It was a great idea to write something for Halloween, (I think I maybe are going ...

    Nov 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A young spy and a young cop Chapter 3

    That was a great chapter:) I think you wanted to write something Else than: ‘’Not so fast. The way I see it, I OUGHT to Get something for doing this.’’ ...

    Oct 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Funeral

    Wow! What a great story!! I really Linked the part that he was buried undergrown, and the fact that people toughed that he was dead! It came to me as ...

    Oct 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A young spy and a young cop Chapter 2

    Wow! This was a great chapter. I think that the first one was a little more exiting But I really liked anyway. I like that the salersman is a little ...

    Oct 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A young spy and a young cop

    Hello Firerose! I really liked your story!!! I think it's very exiting with the fact that she has a secret job, and the fact that she lies to the police. ...

    Oct 25, 2018


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