WriterMajorInRomance

_ very short poem but you expressed the idea clearly. _ well, just my opinion, but I think you should've made this longer so that you could've described every emotion ...

--- wow! I definitely like this poem! :D Really explains well what a man would sometimes think when they get rejected. ;) -- speechless, speechless, speechless... :D

Okay, let me try to correct some things. Well, you cannot depend on my corrections though, these are just my opinion or what I think?? Hope it will help. There ...

hello! --- I like the poem, well, I got the message somehow, the only thing I demand is to make this poem longer so that you can explain the emotions ...

] I make really short, honest comments so please bear with me. :D ] first, I say that you're a great team.. :D This poem sounds good, even the concept ...

] good poem you have here! ] you clearly described what happens after a typhoon/storm :D ] have nothing else to say, sorry :D

] good poem, :D tee-hee! ] honestly, it seemed a little slow-paced, but it's cool. You have been descriptive, I like the way you paint a picture through your words ...

] whoa, first of all.. I hate you. I hate you for letting me fall into this prank! :D hahaha! Seriously, I love this poem, you got me caught here, ...

] great descriptions about night time, matt! (Can I call you Matt?) and nice personification with the trees. :D ] sorry if I only leave a short comment here, like ...

] it's too short but I love it. I also felt like I wish this could be longer, because I want more of this! :D sooo great!! ] love the ...

I wish I wasn't, but I'm dawn in I wish i wasn't, but I am - isn't it supposed to be "drawn in" ? The way she lays there so ...

Master your sin before she becomes your master!