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Re: The F.U.N. Song.
You. Are. My. God.
Sun Jun 05, 2011 1:46 am -
Re: In just a few years
Well there you go. A prom you have went to. :D
Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:01 pm -
Re: The Perfect Life
This is really good. You can completely understand how you're feeling in this. Great Job :D
Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:53 pm -
Re: Running With Music
Hey! I really like the last two lines in the second stanza. I thought they were great. I liked the whole thing, actually. Great job on the piece. :D
Thu Mar 24, 2011 5:30 pm -
Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence
Ohmigosh! This is super cute! I really like the last line. It had a really nice flow with the rhymes. Great job with it. :D
Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:09 pm -
Re: An Ode To Mathematics
Oh my gosh. My feelings for math are in words. I. I. I'm in love!!! :) Ha ha. Really awesome.
Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:26 am -
Re: Gangsta Cat Rap
OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS. You can tell I really like it because I just used all caps. It was sooo funny and cute! Great job on this.:D
Thu Mar 10, 2011 12:46 am -
Re: So get out
Wow. This was a fantastic piece. It was just really, really good. That's all I can really say. Great job on this. Keep pushing.
Thu Mar 10, 2011 12:30 am -
Re: Unreal Letters
Wow. I love this. Short review, sorry. But it's real. Not fake.
Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:46 pm -
Re: My Superman
This was a very sweet poem. It was so cute and sweet and wonderful. It put butterflies in my stomach. Great job, love.:)
Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:24 pm -
Re: I lift my heart
Hey, doll. Looove the poem. It had a great flow and packed full of emotion. It's also pretty cute too. It was very nice and you did a great job. ...
Tue Jan 25, 2011 1:00 am -
Re: Silly Me
Nothing bad to say. Short and sweet. And very cute! It's one of the ones that make you go "awww, how adorable". :) Good job
Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:39 pm -
Re: You died, tonight.
*Bursts into laughter*
Fri Jan 07, 2011 2:10 pm -
Re: Posession
Love, love, love the total darkness oncoming feeling. It's one of those poems where the chills slowly work their way up your back. Really great. I like the flow of ...
Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:44 pm -
Re: My secret....
It's very small, but it speaks volumes. Not much to critique on because it's wonderful. Keep writing because your amazing with words and can make them dance. And dearly sorry ...
Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:37 pm
