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You mean that a character in your book wrote this? Okay, whatever. This was incredibly cool. I love the rhyming--it didn't seem forced--and the imagery was simple but pleasing. Keep ...

Hhhmm... Meh. This was good, but as a poem, I feel it should have more imagery and emotion. This is just basically a rhyming chant and all we get from ...

Wow, that was stunning. I didn't exactly understand all of it, but there's many poems whose meaning elude me on this site. I'll let you decide whether we can blame ...

I have to agree on the mixed up part. The flow was pretty good, but I think this was cliched. We've all read poems about light amongst darkness and the ...

Well, this was excellent. :) I liked the unique theme and the subtle imagery, and I can imagine a voice--a simple divine voice--reading this. I love the kind of tone ...

Hykuas? Meh...did you mean Haikus? Anyways. I liked this poem--it was very sweet, even though I can't relate 100% of the time. Unfortunately... I think you could add more imagery ...

offence, but this poem nearly makes me afraid to comment. It's very..."in your face", for lack of a better phrase. I agree. As I read this, I couldn't help but ...

A glimpse of sunlight broke through the cloudy sky above rendering the ground with a moment of bliss for just mere seconds. I'm not sure I like that as an ...

Well, this is very, very short. But at least you acknowledged it. :wink: So. *Cracks knuckles* Let's get this party started. The whole theme of this poem is really rather ...

Oh my god... That was really, really, really good. I mean...wow. I agree with Fangala but otherwise this is amazing. The line 'Thunder threw our eyes closed' is really powerful ...

Deuce was so surprised, that her heart jumped to at least four times its normal speed. Good first sentence there. Really caught my attention. :) She cast a startled glance ...

Ah, I've heard this song! I did a project on it in 5th grade! :) A solum cloaked figure of a man walked into the approaching darkness, as large gloomy ...

I know i'm here. I know i'm alive. I'm in a hospital. Capitalize your I's. :wink: Am i better now? Mama will i wake up soon? Again with the I's, ...

James Bidas, a soldier, was already tired of the watch shift. His wooden chair was stiff, and extremely uncomfortable. The boredom was intense, sitting and watching, steadily, into the night. ...

I really liked the imagery in this, besides the kissing and the bottles. And the chest thing. xD But that's because I'm, well, what can I say..I'm 12! Overall, I ...