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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: love and like are not synonyms

    Hey, there! I just read this, so I'll leave a few comments. First of all, this is an uncommon topic that makes the reader think while reading the poem. It's ...

    Aug 28, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gymnopedie #3

    Hey, there! I'm here to leave a review. This sounds like a very introspective and insightful poem. The narrator seems to be struggling with intrusive thoughts, and since I think ...

    Jul 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: jade

    Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this poem. One of the things that is easy to notice right off is how the narrator obviously admires the person he/she is writing about ...

    Jul 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Five Wishes ~Chapter One~

    Hey, there! I'd like to leave a quick review. One of the first things I will mention is that I appreciate the length of this chapter. It's long enough to ...

    Jul 3, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: lost song.

    Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this beautiful short story! I really enjoyed reading it, and it flows really well. Your use of paragraph breaks is well-managed and formatted in such ...

    Jun 13, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Dark Side of the Coffee Machine 0: The BIG boss!

    Hello, I hope you are currently doing well. I saw part 2 of this work in the Green Room and decided to start at the beginning, which obviously led me ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i place my candle upside down to rest my chin

    Hey, there! I'm here to leave a quick review. Firstly, I found this poem easy to read, which also makes it easy to understand. I also liked the use of ...

    May 24, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: This Is My Mood (Colors)

    Hello! I'm here to leave a quick review. First of all, thanks for sharing this poem. Sometimes I like to see what other people are writing and how they approach ...

    May 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: i am the only one

    Hey, there! Just leaving a quick review. First of all, I think the way this poem is broken into lines actually flows quite well. It takes a certain sense and ...

    May 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: mirror / reflection

    Hey, there! I started this poem with a bit of a reminder of one I have written concerning a mirror, but this one does take a different route than mine, ...

    May 3, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fictional Dilemma

    Hey, there! I'm so glad I found this in the Green Room. If no one has told you this before, allow me the privilege of announcing to you that there ...

    May 2, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The promise of a seed

    Hey, there! This is such a heartwarming story. Thanks for sharing it. One thing I like about it is how realistic it sounds. I got the impression it is maybe ...

    Apr 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: A new story, maybe a pirate one

    Hey, there! I'm not really going to do much or any grammatical critique or anything this time, because it seems you're really still in decision mode about it, but I ...

    Apr 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: character development

    Hey, there. First off, I'd like to say I really like how you've titled this poem and yet never directly alluded to the title within the body of the poem. ...

    Apr 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bittersweet Nightshade: Chapter 1 Part 1

    Hey, there! I'm just going to leave a few quick comments, as I don't have a lot of time at the moment. I was mainly drawn in by the title. ...

    Jan 3, 2023


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