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Re: love and like are not synonyms
Hey, there! I just read this, so I'll leave a few comments. First of all, this is an uncommon topic that makes the reader think while reading the poem. It's ...
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Re: Gymnopedie #3
Hey, there! I'm here to leave a review. This sounds like a very introspective and insightful poem. The narrator seems to be struggling with intrusive thoughts, and since I think ...
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Re: jade
Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this poem. One of the things that is easy to notice right off is how the narrator obviously admires the person he/she is writing about ...
Jul 11, 2023 -
Re: Five Wishes ~Chapter One~
Hey, there! I'd like to leave a quick review. One of the first things I will mention is that I appreciate the length of this chapter. It's long enough to ...
Jul 3, 2023 -
Re: lost song.
Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this beautiful short story! I really enjoyed reading it, and it flows really well. Your use of paragraph breaks is well-managed and formatted in such ...
Jun 13, 2023 -
Re: Dark Side of the Coffee Machine 0: The BIG boss!
Hello, I hope you are currently doing well. I saw part 2 of this work in the Green Room and decided to start at the beginning, which obviously led me ...
Jun 10, 2023 -
Re: i place my candle upside down to rest my chin
Hey, there! I'm here to leave a quick review. Firstly, I found this poem easy to read, which also makes it easy to understand. I also liked the use of ...
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Re: This Is My Mood (Colors)
Hello! I'm here to leave a quick review. First of all, thanks for sharing this poem. Sometimes I like to see what other people are writing and how they approach ...
May 15, 2023 -
Re: i am the only one
Hey, there! Just leaving a quick review. First of all, I think the way this poem is broken into lines actually flows quite well. It takes a certain sense and ...
May 12, 2023 -
Re: Only if...
Hey, there! Just a quick review. I found this poem fairly easy to read, so great job with that. While longer ones can be great as well, short and simple ...
May 12, 2023 -
Re: mirror / reflection
Hey, there! I started this poem with a bit of a reminder of one I have written concerning a mirror, but this one does take a different route than mine, ...
May 3, 2023 -
Re: Fictional Dilemma
Hey, there! I'm so glad I found this in the Green Room. If no one has told you this before, allow me the privilege of announcing to you that there ...
May 2, 2023 -
Re: Everyone together
Hey, there! I see you're contributing to the world of poetry! Well, here goes my review. The topic/theme of this poem is very distinct, and the content of the poem ...
Apr 28, 2023 -
Re: The promise of a seed
Hey, there! This is such a heartwarming story. Thanks for sharing it. One thing I like about it is how realistic it sounds. I got the impression it is maybe ...
Apr 28, 2023 -
Re: A new story, maybe a pirate one
Hey, there! I'm not really going to do much or any grammatical critique or anything this time, because it seems you're really still in decision mode about it, but I ...
Apr 27, 2023
