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Re: Dead Magic.
Hey everyone, this is just a peom I felt like writing the other day, needs edits! suggestions please? Dead Magic. Her nimble fingers weave magic The delicate creators of a ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Lanes
Walking to Tec seemed longer today, was it because I was thinking of him? His liquid purple and blue eyes, his shaggy fair hair, just thinking of him gave me ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]
Hey Meep, im here for the crappy review you requested :) Author's note: Hi there! Thanks for taking the time to read this :D It's been a long time (major ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Wise Innocence
Wise Innocence Orange and red leaves swirled around Paul, the dove. Ruffling his feathers, he laughed as a leaf brushed his stomach. Fire danced around him. Fall had been here ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Dark Flame
Im guessing some kind of love? :) I like this, could do with some improving but it is well writen :) Keep writing xo
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Missing You
Hey Wicked! Okay first of... Maybe you could work on you ryming, it's ahd to try and sing a song with just words, and what has never had music put ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Time
Time Time passes by like wind to me, Unlocking the (I just think it will sound better :) future like a key, Unseen by all , but treasured most, And ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Such A Tragedy
Can't you see? I'm just a mess, One good for nothing mess. I spend my days drowning in sadness, Running away from it with my madness. Who could of known, ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Everything but the truth
You are nothing but a fairytale , Is fiction not a crime? A gripping tale of courage, Your lies are like a chime. If you where as noble, As your ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Charmed Soul
Everytime I hear your euphonic whispers in my ear, my soul drags me to the bottom of the ocean behind the soft sand until my breath becomes labored, and my ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: And the dark thoughts expand once again.
Winged angel of the night, Fly into my nightly visions. Change the course of the path I set, As I sway in and out of conciousness. Take the first full ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Your Ghost
- I know this is pretty wordy, but I don't usually write lyrics. This is actually something I wrote when I fell in love, and then when he was avoiding ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: As I sit here
As I sit here I think, I think of what’s going on, I think about what’s going to happen, I think about what’s already happened. I sit here and I ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Especially When It's Amber
They pushed it into an unwilling hand, a silver flask of my particular poison, of an addiction stronger than life and love. They shared their revelries with a stranger gladly, ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Dear Someone.
Natalie Stewart poured the remains of her Coke onto the sand, shaking out the last few drops. She pulled out a pen and some note paper. She leaned against her ...
Oct 10, 2010
