Winchester

Hey, it's Red. Honestly, I don't write poetry - so I'm bad at reviewing it. There isn't actually anything bad I can write about this, because it's beautiful - and ...

Hi, Red here. Okay, so this does need a lot of work - the plot line it's self does seem interesting. At the beginning, you mentioned that a lot of ...

Hey, Red here - this is, in fact my first review in a long time so excuse me if I'm a little rusty. :) First of all, hats off to ...

Hey, Bonkers! Okay, so first song! I actually really like this, and I can imagine this being a song - just a few nitpicks. "Is this a kind of dream, ...

Okay! Hi! Now, if this is improved. It could be really good. So, I'm here to help! "The side slid open and she was violently pulled in. Her hoodie ripped ...

Hi! I'll start by saying that, this needs a little backstory - open with the IM Chat but then introduce who Matt is straight after, not majorly - but introduce ...

- Prolouge - Okay, first - I don't think HTML coding works on here anymore. Do you not have the option to change it to italics or bold in a ...

Okay, well. The first problem for me is your total lack of full stops, and capital letters - even though you don't need many because of your lack of full ...

I'm terrible at this, so It's going to be more of a comment. -I like the way it starts, but It seems a bit too overly discriptive, not as the, ...

o.0 I really, really like this - a lot >.< Someone said further up - it is very vague, but that's what makes it so intresting, because there's a different ...

The high school couple, They think they’re in love They kiss all day and night And hold hands down the hall They’re stuck in their own world Until it eventually ...

Hey, Okay, so maybe you need to add a bit of punctuation in there, commas at the ends of lines maybe? But I like this, it's a bit short but ...

Once I had a summer sun who kept me warm and bright, a waxing moon who taught meconstellations in the night, but autumn brought a turn of leaves; soon your ...

Hey, I'm not an American citizen, but obviously with the news and i agree with you, and everyone is entitled to there own oppinion, so just remember that... Good poem ...

I miss you. I miss knowing you were only a walk away. I miss being able to wake up and see your face. Your lovely face. Blue-green eyes the size ...