WillowPaw1

This was SO inspirational! I am an introvert myself :D Anyways, I spotted no errors, unless "Xbox" isn't spelled like "Xbox" (how you put it), but other than that everything ...

Wow, okay, this was great. I never really actually thought of the definition of victory, but after reading this I can totally agree with it. This was.Really good, I don't ...

Hello there! WillowPaw here to review your story! Okay, this was pretty good! Let's split it up in three sections, grammar, characters, and plot. First, grammar. It was pretty good, ...

Hello! I'm here to give you a review. First of all, you should really fix up your grammar. You need to capitalize all words that start the dialogue (unless it ...

Wow!! Unexpected ! :) Okay, onto my review. First of all, some sentences start with "But" which is a conjunction, used to connect sentences. Either connect it to the previous ...

Hello! WillowPaw here to review your story! :) I only caught a few mistakes: "He looked over at where I was sitting and saw my stuff, but he probably though ...

Wow this was amazing! There were only a few errors I noticed, like you wrote parents' instead of parent's, and didn't capitalize Mom in one place. I didn't notice any ...

Agh! This makes me wish I myself could have wings (and I do want them :P) Great job! I didn't see any spelling errors or grammatical errors. And yes everythin ...

Great job! I totally had the feeling of mild sadness and pity for the girl, and hear the sad voice of someone reciting it. Yay! I really love your rhyming ...

*breates deeply to try to calm self* THIS WAS AMAZING! Okay, first off, I like how in the first paragraph you have an explanation of where they were, what the ...

What I love about your story is the characters. They each have their very own personalities; Hawkscreech sounds like a big jerk who'll get mad easily (obviously, from the last ...

Okay, as in your description you were trying to cheer up your little brother? Good job, this poem is very heartwarming and silly (in a good way). There were a ...

I'm here to review your story! :D First off, this pulled me in very easily! You had a very good introduction. I like this plot idea and storyline, it is ...

Wow!! This was really good, maybe I'm just jealous because I can't write poems/lyrics. :P Okay, I could totally hear the tune/melody/whatever its called going on in my head while ...

Okay, my review is coming right up! (Just to let you know: it's like all good feedback :P) I think my favorite segment is the third one; People who are ...